Update 1.19!

It looks like a depth thing to me--like, Chester just has more and deeper shadows. Especially around the face Andrew just looks kinda flat.

Regonoreth

LESS INTERNAL SCREAMING HERE

Dkrewe

*internal screaming*

Vic Viper

Spoiler: I've been working on Spencer's update for the past couple of days x3

DyneWulf

On an unrelated note, I might have an idea for Spencer's date (in case you haven't thought about it) ; since you can go to Critical Strike with him for the date on Thursday, how about making the situation different in case your character refused to go to the dancing club on Tuesday in order to go there first ? Like giving an edge to the MC on the games they'll play together (unless Spencer pulls an Ami Mizuno (Ep. 8 of Japanese/Viz Sailor Moon, not the DiC version) on the MC), second conversation with Chester, or at the extreme, having Spencer noting that he went to play video games rather than hang around with him ? At least something to tie in with this previous choice.

Vic Viper

Louis the dropbox link is working, i just checked it now

David Drake

I can't download it either. The first link cannot make it to the page and the second link goes to One Drive and says This item might not exist or is no longer available. This item might have been deleted, expired, or you might not have permission to view it. Contact the owner of this item for more information.

Such thought. It certainly helps to see what people think about it all ;3 Gives me lots of ideas to play with~

DyneWulf

Yeah, when I put Andrew in and saw him next to Chester, I noticed the difference too. I think it's just that Chester has heavier, darker lines, so it might not be a big deal to correct! I'm seeing a lot of positive feedback for Darius's job too, so a lot of that blame can be put on CM for the surprise outfit he had first put Darius in. It's really what pushed it in that direction. And I have a lot to work with when it comes to WHY Darius and Spencer might have issues.

DyneWulf

i loved pretty much everything about the update, the only thing i was kinda 'eh' on was andrew's face proportions and thin lineart but only because it clashed so much with chester, everything else about his design was awesome especially that 'sinister anime glasses' thing. i'm glad darius is showing he sees you as a friend in addition to a potential sex partner, plus learning what his job is was really cool while also being pretty unexpected, like i kinda thought he would say model or maybe actor. i just keep on imagining different possible reasons why spencer seems to have bad blood with darius, like did they date once, does he feel jealous that mc would show interest in someone he doesn't respect instead of himself, does that line in spencer's route where he mentions how darius can't get a steady relationship have any relevance here, there's so much to digest. (and god, a whole month and a half until we likely see chester and mc actually sleep in the same bed, i can't wait)

Vivienne

SPOILERS Typed in condoms to and got this response MC: "Condoms?" "There's no reason I'll need those..." "I mean ... There's no way that'd work with us right now, right?" "I don't even know how we'd begin doing something like that..." which is understandable because the MC is a virgin and so is Chester but i think Chester MIGHT have more in mind this trip and MC will regret he was not more willing to buy lube. lol

Eric

Glad some of those ideas could help and ya for patreons that have played through the routes more than 2/3 times the freedom to alter the story a bit each playthrough is a huge plus for replayability. Finished Darius's route to and to be honest i thought he would turn out to be a male escort. XD Glad i was wrong, what you chose is much more interesting.

Eric

It came up as "why would i need something like that"

BadTech Games

condoms IS in there x3 I wonder why it didn't show up for you, if you typed that in!

DyneWulf

Finished Chester's route. Why is condoms not in there, We all KNOW why they would be needed. Play safe ;)

BadTech Games

Worst is that Spencer isn't really coy either, he's pretty much the opposite ; sassy, playful, calm, serious whenever he has to be... and the sex tease do come up after the stripper bar event (he teases you sexually even before he admits his love for you or know anything about your feelings), it's not all that different from Darius, hell Spencer's route is the one which probably has the more and the most striking sexual undertones so far. It would be a total opposite of Darius if Spencer was a shy bookish type and a nerd, not doing any sports, and probably a misanthrope. I personally think it's more accurate to say that, so far, Dozer would be Darius' yang. I bet they would get along just fine if Spencer just put in the effort (unless past history), I mean Darius did try to hook them up in Spencer's route, while Spencer is the only character who's outright against that you spend time with someone he doesn't like. Even Andrew hasn't shown himself to be that protective and worried, yet.

Vic Viper

HAha, they are, aren't they?

DyneWulf

Darius and Spencer are the yin and yang of your game

It is a lot of work, having to put in each word with a response to each one! I will be adding more words to it based around feedback that people give, so you can expect there to be some new ones added in the future. And thanks for the other ideas! I hadn't thought about some of those choices, but I think I'll incorporate some of those into future updates. It gives everyone a bit more freedom about what to do, and I think everyone enjoys that ;3

DyneWulf

Chester is my fav to in a close tie with coach in 2nd. ;3

Eric

Finished Chester's route and it was great. Didn't feel like filler ,just more story development. I liked the "type your things to bring with" part, vary unique to see that incorporated into a VN (most don't do it cuz it's a lot more work). A few thing i would add though is "hairbrush/comb" and maybe connect that to "hairspray/hair gel" cuz i do not know what the MC's hair is like but i would not be able to tame my hair with out it and this is nit picky but let us use the word "boxers" or "underwear" and just get the same response. Maybe add "map" to cuz i do not trust cellphones in the mountains or Chester's memory. For more areas to explore maybe let us explore more of Spencer's work place like "go to bar area" , "watch a show at stage", "sit in lounge area like a loner", and "peak in back stage area". Same with Harold's house to with the different room's the MC can look around in or just cook him something on maybe otherwise down time. Definitely have his pool be a side destination though if we get another day were we choose were to go. I also feel like in a future update that blue padded wrestling room the MC's works out in with Darius on the 2nd day could have it's own background. These are just some fun ideas so if you read all that DyneWulf than thanks.

Eric

Hey, I wanna see them kiss too, but Jayne's pretty right. Just think about how awkward the situation was for them both ;3 I don't think either of them would know just what to do, and both are too nervous to make that move so quickly.

DyneWulf

i'd also like to see them kiss but i think this is part of the whole 'they're both have no experience at being in a relationship' thing, like mc wanted to jump straight into having sex and that kinda went poorly, so they're both trying to figure out what's acceptable to want to do and taking it as slow as possible. on top of the fact that they've either been in school or at the apartment that andrew lives in so that complicates things.

Vivienne

lmao i also tried dildo n lube. there gonna be alone for a weekend they will need it!! i do have one suggetion when they decide to be boyfriends they should have atleast kissed. i liked that part thought it was the only thing missing. when hes acting up i like you blah blah put in a kiss option n shut him up answear his question.

furry81

HAha, some interesting words to toss in. I certainly want to see what else people try. WHO KNOOOOWS? There was a little... miscommunication between me and CM about Andrew, but I'm working around my screw-up. Gives me some stuff to work with.

DyneWulf

I'm disappointed I can't bring a dildo, I obviously need that ! But extra points for being able to bring "ass" and "dick" for the convention. There probably should be an answer for "ID Card", "phone", "food", "movies", "homework" maybe, and we don't really know if his computer is a laptop, but I'd add the choice. "Comics" so we could have a hot debate with Chester on how Japanese comi-- I mean, mangas, are superior, and show how much of a "weamoo" he is. (jk) Holy shit, past history between Darius & Spencer ? Or maybe Darius' girlfriend was one of Spencer's close friends ? The last two sprites, there's something odd about them ; Andrew kinda looks a bit odd next to Chester but it's ok, however the tiger looks quite a bit more "angular" than the other characters, I dunno how to really put it.

Vic Viper

I'm sorry ;--; I've never had that issue before, but it should be fixed now! I added alternate links to it.

DyneWulf

I can't get it either. Apparently the universe is conspiring to give DW superpowers of teasing.

Regonoreth

I can't download, sharing limit exceeded... please fix it soon!!

David Drake

Clearly if he dresses up as a Taurus it should be the one from Saint Seiya. He could play tennis like that even! It wouldn't matter how badly he hits the ball--no one could return it anyway because they'd be blinded by the shininess. >_>

Regonoreth

I don't wanna be biased, but I think Chester's my favorite too >.>

DyneWulf

luv the update i wasnt expecting much from chester at first but hes my fav. i was hopeing they would kiss already the are bfs lol. but all the stories are pretty good. and moving around the house was funny. keep up the awesome work look forward to more. thanks

furry81

killing me with that Darius cliffhanger, haha - I'm really enjoying how you're developing Darius, I couldn't imagine a better character direction for him

Coltyn91

Thanks, Yutari ;D

DyneWulf

Thank you, thank you!

DyneWulf

Have fun ;3

DyneWulf

I try to keep up with my schedule, otherwise, I might just slack off, and I can't be doing that! x3 Thank you!

DyneWulf

Thanks! I do have a cosplay outfit in mind already, but you're right, that really would suit him and the theme here x3

DyneWulf

Love the update and the new typing feature. Also have you decided on what chesters cosplay is, if not I would suggest making him cosplay as Taurus from fairy tail. It just seems fitting to me. :P

Rednecktexan

Not only do you constantly put out great updates but you keep to a schedule and that is something I would always appreciate - keep up the awesome work!

Coltyn91

i could sense the update was gonna come out before the weekend, glad i checked yay

Hyou Vizer

love this game ! cant wait for more ! great job !

Ricky

Congrats on hitting 1k you done really well with this game dude.

Yutari