When Ghangaji sent me the original one, he had also added in an alternate, and this was the alternate.
It goes along with the story I wrote, in case you didn't see that yet >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rrHip9x9yD5_0rgZw64MKj-1DkjIbL6kidYcvJxN-ps/edit?usp=sharing
And thanks for folks that have given me feedback already on the story! It'll help me improve going forward (I hope x3).
Kilik Odagawa
2019-03-29 19:12:12 +0000 UTCMyneghon
2019-03-27 17:43:19 +0000 UTC