CAPTIVE part IV - pg28
Added 2021-10-05 09:00:57 +0000 UTC
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Gervic said something mean to the dragons and Bob held a grudge against him ever since.
Vju79
2021-10-05 16:11:26 +0000 UTCThey sure talked a lot, did they?
Vju79
2021-10-05 16:04:53 +0000 UTCWhew you gotta put em in point form for easier reading haha. But anyway it's nice to see you're so engrossed in my comic lol
Vju79
2021-10-05 16:04:25 +0000 UTCNow I just want Bob to die because I'm sick of his lectures.
Johncrew
2021-10-05 12:34:03 +0000 UTCDrop him, Gerv!
James Michael
2021-10-05 12:16:20 +0000 UTCOOOO Now Im hella curious what shit Gervic did
Indigo
2021-10-05 10:39:41 +0000 UTCsorry for the vague long dialog πΆ but i am ngl this story does make me wonder would happen next; because i am still surprised and captivated by the story and hoping for the best outcome for everyone
Forrest
2021-10-05 10:35:14 +0000 UTCWell bob makes a good point if the storyline begin from Bobs point of view and Bobs life yeah bob would have looked like a hero but even a hero would torture or harm like what bob did and yeah i am upset with bob and do wish he gets to go back to suffer in the kitchen not even a hero would kill right now so i hope that gervic has the maturity to make the right choice he does have to hurt kill or torture just like what bob did becuase if that is the stuff that bob did to make himself evil wont it make gervic evil too (mostly becuase gervic said he had no choice i wouldnt say it all his fault just like vlagg gave gervic a chance i am sure gervic gave bob a chance and this momet is very big turning point in the story too) i hope gervic does the right thing even tho bob is probably gonna try and get gervic in the back and gervic will be forced to take bob out for that on with in the next page or 2
Forrest
2021-10-05 10:32:57 +0000 UTCOops guess my english is getting kinda rusty again...
Vju79
2021-10-05 09:52:34 +0000 UTCThe dialogue is pretty awesome and on point, though "before your story began" would make more sense as it points to past events (history), and something like "now your adventure will begin" is an event in the present moment.
Darkmoor Runebane
2021-10-05 09:43:09 +0000 UTCOh shut up Bob π Also.. Wonderful update! β¨
SteveWuff
2021-10-05 09:05:08 +0000 UTCPlease Drop bob for the evil that he did to gervic πππ
Alexarthur
2021-10-05 09:03:56 +0000 UTC
