（エロあまりないです）13p更新 2/28
Added 2025-02-28 12:43:23 +0000 UTChttps://doramusu.fanbox.cc/posts/8490774
お世話になっております、ドラムスです。
またこんなタイミングになってしまい、本当に申し訳ございません。
ひとまずこれでしつけ編は終わりです（成功してない）、今回はエロが少なくてすいません……。
実は一旦同人誌にしようかと考えておりまして、冒頭部に何ページか追加する予定です。次回以降はとりあえずそちらを更新しようと思っていますが、
ちょっとエロ部分の増量であるとか、そもそものクオリティとか色々見直さなきゃいけないですね……。（読み返して全然NTRじゃねーじゃん！！と思いました）
短文で恐縮ですが、ひとまず頑張ります！
Comments
/3 But I also think that at the end, if she woke up under the extremely strong mental shock, but the irreversible consequences had already been done (eg: pregnant with YHB's child), she was forced to pay a huge price to salvage what she’s done, so that she could be with Daiki again one day, would such a plot be more poignant? (Like after they finally getting married, she keep trying to give birth to a child that have Daiki’s blood, but keep failing during the pregnancy because her body was broken. When she took out the divorce agreement and wanted him to abandon her, he refused) Sorry for saying so many strange things, please forgive me, I rarely make long comment, but I also rarely see adult works that so delicate on mental description, Maybe I am a little obsessed, and I look forward to seeing a non-classical ending to make it completely owns me. XDD
Donland's Lodge
2025-03-28 06:26:59 +0000 UTC/2 And MC also not a ‘let is go’ kind of character design, but try to salvage everything while still hold its respect of the FMC as a person than a property. Will their relationship recover to some extent in the end? Or will it eventually ended at a crushing moment when all of their emotions burst out, they finally waken up, but to realised the damage can never be fully recovered? Please forgive my dissatisfaction HAHA, I began to feel that this work ended with a simple “Classical Ending”—where the woman was taken away, twisted, then tortured the MC forever under the command of 'YellowHairBastard'" seems to be “insufficient” for such well organised emotional work of yours Don't get me wrong, I really want to see the cute plot where twisted Airu continues to try to rule Daiki like a little devil and fails. ;p
Donland's Lodge
2025-03-28 06:26:14 +0000 UTCHello Dramus! Thank you for your excellent work! If you can see my comments, it is a bit long so I try to finishing it by reply this comment, just want to express my thoughts so feel free to decide you want to reply or not :) I also noticed that maybe you’re also a member of the "mental shock" club. The delicate description of a girl's psychology, from being destroyed by external forces, collapsing and being completely distorted into another thing, is particularly exciting for hardcore fans. In Classical NTR works, the woman in a couple who is not emotionally connected enough, usually easily submited to carnal and taken away by someone else, she will soon start to spit on the face of MC, This kind of old-fashioned work had it’s charm, I admit. But when someone tries to add real emotions to characters, things will become interesting. The Female Character’s feelings for the MC are real, but they are destroyed and distorted due to uncontrollable intervention.
Donland's Lodge
2025-03-28 06:24:46 +0000 UTC彼女が最初に登場したメガネをかけた男の子とセックスすることを願っています…. 🤓
リョウ
2025-03-09 08:16:42 +0000 UTCThank you so much! I truly appreciate your kind words! I love drawing twisted expressions and the distorted psychology of mentally unstable female characters like Airu, so it makes me incredibly happy to know that someone with similar tastes enjoys my work. 🙇 That being said, since I haven’t fully explored the "childhood friend dynamic" or "Airu’s romantic relationship," I feel that this development lacks some depth and credibility. (Of course, it’s entirely due to my slow progress… 😿) I’ll keep doing my best, so I hope you continue to enjoy my work! By the way, I’ll be making a proper announcement later, but I plan to release the English version of this doujinshi as soon as possible. The timing will depend on discussions with the translation company, but I’d really appreciate your patience in the meantime!
ドラムス
2025-03-08 10:19:30 +0000 UTCコメントありがとうございます！ 続きにご期待ください……🤯
ドラムス
2025-03-08 09:28:13 +0000 UTCアイルーは、学校の他の男子生徒とセックスしているところをダイキに見せつけて、ダイキを嫉妬させ、マゾヒストにするつもりでしょうか?
リョウ
2025-03-07 09:44:16 +0000 UTCI love seeing Airu's mental breakdown at the end! She's usually so cute so getting to see her make such angry and scary facial expressions is really interesting and quite erotic. Really excited to see more of this dark side of her! The look of pure anger and rage on her face when she say's she will discipline Daiki makes it seem like she's very angry at him for not being jealous of her talking to other men. Now she wants him to obey her and become her toy. I love the idea of their childhood friendship falling apart, she hates Daiki as a friend now and instead wants him to be her slave. The pure love she had for him has been turned into malicious and twisted lust. I can't wait to see you draw Airu and Daiki's next interaction in the future because I imagine their relationship is going to be very different now. Keep up the good work!
nepok
2025-03-05 23:32:45 +0000 UTCありがとうございます！！🙇 はたしてエロ漫画で先が不透明な展開が必要か疑問ではありますが……笑 個人的には後半部もちょっと面白いと思うんですけど、その前に前日譚とかもいい加減書かなくちゃいけないのでいったん一部・完ということでどうか一つ🙇 ご興味をもっていただき、ありがとうございます！！
ドラムス
2025-03-05 00:34:47 +0000 UTCうれしいお言葉ありがとうございます！ エロが少ないのは少ないので、意識的にエロ・コンテンツを盛り込めるようにしたいです……🤯 藍瑠ちゃんはコロコロ感情が変わるので、またとんでもない顔を披露する機会があるかもしれませんね🧐 なるべく早く更新できるよう頑張ります！！！
ドラムス
2025-03-05 00:14:54 +0000 UTC更新お疲れ様です！ アイルちゃんが店長を捨てる展開か、店長が捨てる展開なのか、はたまた店長と付き合うのか、ダイキと付き合うのかどうなるのかわからなくて楽しみです！！
難波
2025-03-03 17:21:23 +0000 UTCDon't worry about the delay—well, at least in my case... I'm a very patient person, and I want you to feel no pressure to finish anything or rush whatever genius ideas are on your mind. Take as much time as you need, and if possible, get some rest and see your goal through to the end. I'm truly grateful to be following your work, and you can be sure that I'll be cheering for your success and growth every step of the way. But just so you know, I'm a demanding fan hahaha!"
Aleatrix
2025-03-03 15:38:30 +0000 UTC更新お疲れ様です！ エロイコンテンツが少なくても良い更新でした！そのページから藍瑠ちゃんのメンタル変化は怖かったですね。すごい顔してました笑 次のアップデート待ってます！！
Flygon
2025-03-03 14:40:26 +0000 UTCすいません、こちらに別の方が書かれていたコメントですが、ちょっと荒れちゃいそうなので削除させて頂きました🙇 スクショしましたのでお兄さんゆるして😢
ドラムス
2025-03-03 09:51:43 +0000 UTCThank you so much as always! 🙇 Regarding this 13th page, it was a personally significant part for me, as I’ve always wanted to depict a girl descending into madness. I’m truly delighted to hear that you enjoyed it. Since this kind of expression differs from the mainstream style of adult comics nowadays, I often worry whether it might come across as mere noise. That’s why hearing that you like the story means so much to me—it really encourages me! Now, if only I could speed up my drawing process… 😿 I’ll continue doing my best to meet your expectations. Thank you again! 🙇
ドラムス
2025-03-03 09:46:00 +0000 UTCこちらこそありがとうございます！ おっしゃる通り、ここからはアイルちゃんの快進撃となる予定……なのですが、いい加減前日譚を進めないといけないので続きの展開は少々お時間をいただきたく思います🙇申し訳ありません🙇 私からも、このような遅々として進まない作品に対してお付き合い頂きまして本当にありがとうございます。ご興味が続きましたら、これからもよろしくお願いいたします🙇
ドラムス
2025-03-03 09:38:13 +0000 UTCありがとうございます！！🙇 そう言って頂けると一安心……なのですが、やっぱり最近エロのほうが疎かになってるので次回更新分（また今回の話のプロローグみたいなやつ）は気合入れて書きたいと思います。 ネームを描いてるときは覚醒イベントだ！と一人で盛り上がってましたが、ちょっと怖くなってしまいましたね……笑 キャラ造詣に関してはようやく掘り下げられた気もしますので、後はひたすらエロ漫画としての本分が出せる展開にしたいと思います🙇 お気遣いいただきありがとうございます！（また寒くなってきましたね……）やつみさんもご自愛くださいませ……💃
ドラムス
2025-03-03 09:34:44 +0000 UTC先生、私はアイルーのことが大好きすぎるんです… 他の読者と議論してしまって申し訳ありません。 🙇♂️
橋本
2025-03-03 04:42:57 +0000 UTCコメント有難う御座いますー！ 普段の19禁漫画と違うと思う理由がドラムス様のこの深いキャラクター設定だと思います。 普段エッチだけする漫画とは違います！ ストーリーで読者がよりもっと漫画に集中し、夢中になるその力を持っていただいてると思います！ これからもよろしくお願いします！
kes2336
2025-03-03 01:36:51 +0000 UTCハッピーは相対的なものだから、結末がどのように見えるかわかりません😿
ドラムス
2025-03-03 01:26:15 +0000 UTC暖かいお言葉ありがとうございます！！ 大輝くんを調教する過程でもう一段階くらい変身するかな？と思いますね……🤔 とりあえずエロ方面でもう少し描写を底上げしたいなと思っておりますので、ぜひご期待ください🙇
ドラムス
2025-03-03 01:25:02 +0000 UTCありがとうございます！！少し不安でしたが、ご満足いただけたなら何よりです。 これからも頑張るんだ😍😍🤯
ドラムス
2025-03-03 01:14:43 +0000 UTCありがとうございます！！ 凄い顔になってしまいました笑 もうちょっと可愛く書きたかったんだけど…🤔 覚醒状態の藍瑠ちゃんの活躍はもう少し後になってしまいそうですが、ぜひご期待ください🙇
ドラムス
2025-03-03 01:13:28 +0000 UTCThank you so much for your comment! Of course, I remember you. I'm truly delighted that you’ve taken the time to leave another message. In reality, the continuation of the story beyond this episode will likely take quite some time. As mentioned earlier, my focus is currently on compiling the previous chapters into a doujinshi and working on Abukano Zero, the prequel. I would love to complete everything as soon as possible, but I sincerely apologize that it may be a while before I can share the conclusion of the story with you. I’ll do my very best to meet your expectations, so I would be grateful if you could continue following along!
ドラムス
2025-03-03 01:08:36 +0000 UTCThank you very much for your comments! I truly appreciate your keen interest in my work, and it brings me great joy to see your enthusiasm. However, I sincerely apologize, but posting multiple comments in succession or leaving remarks that do not align with the intent of other people's comments may, in some cases, be regarded as disruptive behavior. I would be most grateful for your understanding and cooperation in refraining from such actions moving forward. Additionally, I deeply regret to inform you that the storyline has already been finalized, and therefore, there is no possibility of making any changes. That being said, I would always be delighted to hear your thoughts on the updated content! Thank you for your kind understanding and continued support🙇
ドラムス
2025-03-03 00:56:18 +0000 UTCI know that sex and erotic things are important in this work, but a well-told story with this character development is something I love more and more every day. I must also comment on the different designs, faces, gestures, lights and shadows. The truth is that I love that in these 13 pages, you have gone through so many emotions in such a short time, and drawn them so well. Keep up the great work, I expect a lot from you.
Zero
2025-03-02 00:06:14 +0000 UTC大樹をハッピーエンドにしてあげてください
PecciniXavier
2025-03-01 11:27:15 +0000 UTCアップデートありがとうございます！次の部分が待ちきれません。アイルはずっと覚悟が決まったように見え、彼女がダイキを奴隷にするためにもっと積極的になるのを見るのが待ちきれません。それに、もちろん、より多くのNTR要素があるのも大歓迎です。改めて、ありがとうございます。
tp123456
2025-03-01 06:14:22 +0000 UTC私も言いたいのは アイルが自分がこんなことをしていると気付いていないのは悲しいね、ダイキ
橋本
2025-02-28 21:53:32 +0000 UTCアイルーが絶望して悲しんでいる姿を見るのが大好きです。彼女がもっと壊れていくのを見たいです🖤
橋本
2025-02-28 18:06:28 +0000 UTC更新お疲れ様です〜👍 エロが少ないってお話しですが、いやいや結構濃厚な感じでしたよ😚それ以外のところでも登場人物の心理描写とかその辺りの掘り下げがすごく丁寧で、それぞれが違う狂気を抱えてるんだなぁと再認識しました。ちょっとしたサスペンス？サイコホラー？みたいなノリで楽しく読めました😄 ここから藍瑠さんの想いがまたさらに明後日の方向にネジ曲がっていくかと思うと今からこわ…楽しみですねぇ🤔 気温の乱高下もあって体調崩しやすいみたいですので、先生もくれぐれもご自愛ください。またの更新を楽しみにしております〜(^^)/
やつみ
2025-02-28 15:54:36 +0000 UTC藍瑠ちゃんがもっと悪女になることが楽しみですね。 どんどんS気が強くなってることが楽しみです。 これからダイキをどうやって幸せなM奴隷にするのかを楽しみにしながら見ます！ 今月もお疲れさまでした
kes2336
2025-02-28 15:19:17 +0000 UTCDramus, my dear, it's been a while since I last commented or bought your amazing work, but today I want to enjoy it. I don't know if you remember, but I'm the girl with thyroid cancer hahaha. I just wanted to thank you for another incredible piece of work, but my heart trembles because it feels like this story might be coming to an end... Dramus, please make my Daiki happy hahaha. Love you!
Aleatrix
2025-02-28 14:14:32 +0000 UTCI liked it very much!!! Whenever I can I will be there to support you master!!!!!😍😍😍
MasterDeath44
2025-02-28 13:36:49 +0000 UTC更新、お疲れ様です。 藍瑠ちゃん、凄い顔してますね。これから、どうなっていくのか楽しみです。
オベリスク
2025-02-28 13:10:52 +0000 UTC
