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Space Ereshkigal & bicorn + x-ray + impregnation

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Space Ereshkigal & bicorn + x-ray + impregnation Space Ereshkigal & bicorn + x-ray + impregnation Space Ereshkigal & bicorn + x-ray + impregnation Space Ereshkigal & bicorn + x-ray + impregnation Space Ereshkigal & bicorn + x-ray + impregnation Space Ereshkigal & bicorn + x-ray + impregnation

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Sunny

Oh I see, I'm sorry! Please don't take it the wrong way! I was just trying to be helpful! I remembered seeing a tweet of yours critiquing the quality of your own art and so I was just trying to put my thoughts into words to try and help maybe give you that spark. I really do love your art and this piece!

Topie

Well, this commission was originally supposed to be a simple sketch. No dialog, colors, variations, gauge mechanics...

JADF@jadf_

Maybe a womb tattoo appears but either way shes become a breedmother. A preinsertion and maybe a pull out would've been good too. Maybe you could experiment with the poses too, like she jerks up a bit with her legs come together and gritting her teeth from the shock on his final thrust shoving everything he can inside and her cute feet there come up and smack into his huge balls and they rest on em as he pumps her full. Sorry, I'm rambling at this point but it's because I was so inspired by your art and this scenario! Hopefully this can pass as constructive criticism and not the ramblings of a horny person, thank you for the art again!

Topie

It's great but I can't help but feel like the great dialogue and Master love bar makes the visuals lack what's being described. I feel like there should've been another angle or two, maybe one from underneath or front facing or close up on her ass getting pounded, gritting her teeth with her faux resistance when it's too late and being slowly corrupted by the pleasure. Like she said, she's a Beast Goddess so this mere beast should be FURIOUSLY trying to impregnate her with this once in a lifetime opportunity. Pressing her into the dirt with his weight as he thrusts and slams into her with all his might, concentrating all his available magical energy into his cock and balls to conquer this high quality female, dragging his flare back and forth. I'd like to see that kind of movement and energy with eresh reacting to it, "it's flaring up!" That flare and cock should be MASSIVELY engorged alongside those balls so plump and throbbing, contracting with every pulse and rope of cum.

Topie

Under "Feb-Mar 2025 batch - part 01": https://k00.fr/5hluomv4

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