Lush Puppies - Ch3 Page 34
Added 2022-08-12 22:57:20 +0000 UTCClarisse being mischievous.
Next pages will back with Thomas and Clarisse for a moment. I like to tell two parallel story to make the things more dynamics, but I'm still learning about how to properly tell a story. Hopefully you feel a little improvement since chapter 1 ^^
Comments
I think you are doing very well at weaving together two different plot lines. I am excited to see the next page :)
trueeutopia
2022-08-13 01:34:12 +0000 UTCWhoooo, more build-up, the most here for me is Theo’s story, and how his life will soon change, I think he’s the youngest here besides Matt and Nobu. I would also like to point out the phasing, looks more like a drama/romance/comfort kind. I can't wait to see how the others play into this, mainly Bart and the stripper employees
Max Freeman
2022-08-13 00:38:40 +0000 UTCNice. This chapter still has some important things to set up and characters from chapter 2 will back for the epilogue too ;-)
Anhes
2022-08-12 23:26:58 +0000 UTCno doubt, the story really sets you for wanting more, not simple, but actually makes you wonder what comes next. I can really read their feelings here
Max Freeman
2022-08-12 23:03:39 +0000 UTC
