Phanphan Phantasies - Ch2 (P12)
Added 2020-09-04 17:54:13 +0000 UTCI know this chapter is less sexual, but I want to set a bit more of characters personalities before the sex part, that way will be more significative when it happens.
I also included the the page sketch, some vignettes are barely doodles but it could be interesting iin case someone want to see how I plan the pages.
Comments
I want to Lug nakey!
Vaska
2020-09-04 18:45:20 +0000 UTCEh doesn’t really matter to me as long as the sex part is good.
FuzzyLopunny
2020-09-04 18:20:47 +0000 UTCI'm enjoying learning more about the setting, can't wait to see more
trueeutopia
2020-09-04 18:15:07 +0000 UTCPersonalities can tell you a lot about a person and what’re they are about, makes the sex scenes more fun and enjoyable, at least for me. The last comic didn't have much to offer other than sex, but if this is new then make it count. I’m kinda disappointed that he couldn't flirt with the security
Max Freeman
2020-09-04 18:05:00 +0000 UTCThis is nice! You should try some interesting panel formats for the story parts. Look up "frank Miller panels" or "Alan Moore panels" for reference.👍
Jojobizad
2020-09-04 18:03:36 +0000 UTC
