Lily's Release #2
Added 2018-08-03 06:30:59 +0000 UTCand the one after that
And the one after that
man she had a lot built up
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Commissioner here. This was remedied upon me pointing out in dm that the face expressions were missing. Its fixed on my end... But... Needs to be uploaded here.
Anthony Gigliotti
2018-09-14 15:34:01 +0000 UTCAwesome! Glad to hear that! Alright, so I lied. I have a couple critiques, and here they are: 1. I feel like Lily’s facial expression should be changing as we progress through the panels, like from a more desperate face to a more relieved one. 2. There should probably be water in the toilet, unless of course it’s one of those waterless-until-flushed toilets. 3. This is my last one. The toilet is pretty full by the second panel, so, by default, the toilet should be overflowing by the third panel. Hope this was helpful!
DK
2018-08-04 06:55:24 +0000 UTCYea man always open to anything constructive, gotta improve somehow
CaraFalsa
2018-08-04 00:43:15 +0000 UTCYES! As always you do an amazing job with your scar works! I do, however, have one critique, if you’re open to hearing it.
DK
2018-08-03 15:56:45 +0000 UTC
