Tommy's Tribulations - Part Twenty-Three (Conclusion + Epilogue!)
Added 2019-12-07 01:53:01 +0000 UTCThe conclusion of Tommy's story!
With things looking bleak Tommy has a friend who will finally help him. Rob is determined to save Tommy from the clutches of his step-mother and step-sister.
Will Rob succeed in saving Tommy? Will George come home and accept the truth? Will Sandra and Erin be able to control Tommy forever? Will Tommy ever get to live a normal life?
All the answers are inside!
Also inside is the Epilogue. Taking place many years later it should hopefully provide some closure for everyone.
Thank you all for reading :)
Comments
Loved the story, but I'll be honest and say when it comes to ABDL fiction, that was an M. Night Shyamalan kinda of ending! Was cool to look forward to updates every week like I used to for wrestling as a kid, lol. Absolutely came to say that I'd like an alternate ending from after he crawls up to George, he really does not have to like it willfully, but perhaps working at the nursery is better than being with his stepmom :P. You are awesome and doing what I would be if I didn't choose a more vanilla, adult life instead! I live vicariously through stories. Thank you!
2019-12-13 21:40:20 +0000 UTCI think the difference between you and Tommy is that Tommy absolutely does not want to be a baby at all! For him being out of the situation and able to live a normal life is victory. I have some long stories and short stories in mind. I would say in the future there is likely to be more novel length stories.
2019-12-09 15:01:31 +0000 UTCI don't mind being a baby obviously ( don't think he can so easily leave it behind) But he spent 2 books being tortured. I would like to see Tommy experience the relaxation and joy I feel when I manage turn myself off after a long day at work. He should see that there is a GOOD side to the things he has experienced not just bad. Either way Congrats on completing this. It was pretty long. you have any plans to write something just as big or do you prefer smaller stories?
Cless
2019-12-09 06:51:08 +0000 UTC
