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《 Kitty Kitty 》English version. | P05-P06

I made some corrections.

《 Kitty Kitty 》English version. | P05-P06

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I know. thank you~

KUMAK

Oh and lastly, don't make the text all Italics there. The font is correct, but maybe use Italics if the character is thinking to themselves, and normal font when they're talking

Riodile

Though... I don't know if it should be "Ku-lau is so horny" or "Ku-lau is so hot". If we're talking about Ku-lau being horny, then it's correct.

Riodile

This translation looks better!

Riodile


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