16 - A Night with Loona Comic
Added 2021-08-28 04:07:09 +0000 UTChttps://www.youtube.com/channel/UCaQjXDbZtQwwy6q4tnFiARg
Spanish version as allways is in the attached files :)
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Hey, Jizoku, feel free to consider/ignore this teeny suggestion, but maybe swap the two lines in the center panel? The flow of the wording looks like it would work better having Moxxie first allude to this new sensation and then followed by his concerns of Loona going too far, thus making him go crazy. Just something to consider before official public release.
Super Shanko
2021-08-31 21:47:07 +0000 UTCAnother excellent job on your comic pages this month, Jizoku. This is getting more spicy, keep up the awesome work. ππ
Bill Young
2021-08-31 13:18:36 +0000 UTCYou could make it all at once and release it in waves. Works for everyone that wayπ₯³
Alexis
2021-08-30 05:22:15 +0000 UTCThat center image is just... MMM! π
SmilinLeviathan
2021-08-29 11:53:00 +0000 UTCThe smiley face cracks me up
chandler hokes
2021-08-29 05:33:46 +0000 UTCwell, I normally work in this way because I like concentrate on a single type of content at once, it is like on 20th I start thinking as comic writer, sketcher and colorist. it's hard for me to jump between different type of artworks. my content would be much slower to make.
Jizoku
2021-08-28 22:01:48 +0000 UTCBOTH!!
Calvin
2021-08-28 17:29:31 +0000 UTCThis is going really great:)
MysteriousCat
2021-08-28 15:00:26 +0000 UTCReally nifty idea
Joshua Steel
2021-08-28 08:56:57 +0000 UTCI'm at the point of believing this was a setup by either Millie or Blitz.
Super Shanko
2021-08-28 08:15:00 +0000 UTCShe is really into him. Lucky guy
David Simmons
2021-08-28 08:12:48 +0000 UTCPlease don't bite this man
2021-08-28 07:26:08 +0000 UTCDamn this is good keep up the good workπ
Kelsey Yamamoto
2021-08-28 05:58:44 +0000 UTCJizoku, I have an idea: this is the third page, so for another month we have to wait. But ... what if you publish a page every 10 days? Same amount of work for you, and we would see a page on the 10th, one on the 20th and one on the 30th, without having to wait for a month! If that's okay with you, take a poll about it, and let's see if the patreons like it too! (ps: obviously, the design is beautiful, congratulations!)
Davide Franzoso
2021-08-28 05:30:52 +0000 UTCOh my... I love this~
Roy Vulpesβ’
2021-08-28 05:24:05 +0000 UTCI love how fast these comics come out you never see creator release comics this fast keep up the good work
Arturo Leon
2021-08-28 04:47:04 +0000 UTCThe way she looks up at him is just killer
A Red Day
2021-08-28 04:13:21 +0000 UTCYum yum. She's gonna be nice and full by the end of this.
Alex Kaplan
2021-08-28 04:11:09 +0000 UTCHere we go!
2021-08-28 04:09:40 +0000 UTCSheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh
argon
2021-08-28 04:09:27 +0000 UTCGod I love this comic π₯°
Andrew Belenets
2021-08-28 04:09:10 +0000 UTCHeβs gonna bloooooow!!! β¦.. In the next issue of Moxxieβs Balls Z.
Super Shanko
2021-08-28 04:08:56 +0000 UTCJust realized, what happens if Blitzo walks in at the end of this and threatens to fuck his wife and Moxxie.
Lords
2021-08-28 04:08:48 +0000 UTCWhoa boy, whose going to be more addicted by the end here?
Crossbones6732
2021-08-28 04:08:46 +0000 UTCLove it!!!!
Nuka Man
2021-08-28 04:08:33 +0000 UTC
