Correction

I like this direction for the comic a lot better. I’d be stoked if more of it was made!!!

Carly Keone

Comic had a lot of potential too

MRtynz

Wish we could have seen more of this comic

MRtynz

I like this more than monti being really creepy and threatening. This seems more like our regular Monti :)

Sadie the Goldfish

I'm liking where this is going. The feel to the story flows nicely.

This is really good so far.

Rea Arts

This way is more logical :)

Rainor

Im unsure if you ever said it somewhere yinllr, but will these ever be colors like the main comic or will they stay as they are now?

Flux Y.

Similar, but different. Interesting, as it will be different from the main story later? It is right now.

3DMM0r

I think the honesty approach Montimer took is good.

Vamps

Yes and now the dark vibes are gone..... were you feeling you didn't want to follow the same story devices as your other comic?

Isaiah Youngbrown

Esta versión hace más sentido

Laura Castrillón

As others are saying, I also like this direction much better with the dialogue. Don’t feel bad about your English either, I believe most understand this isn’t your first language and know how difficult it is. If you would like some help, I’m more than happy to proofread and offer corrections if you ever wish and I’m sure others would also do the same.

Cosmo

This version of Monti is better~

Cy

We also need the fox here !

Chang TingHao

Ah yes, this version of Monti is better! His reasons for keeping Larry are more credible regarding the situation. Great job. ^^

Colt-Lasky

Hahaha I know

yinller

I wonder, Larry can’t stay in home for the rest of his life for keeping his location a secret. Also, how does he go to school, ore meet his friends Deby, Jack, Mourice ?

TheGrimm85

Awww que tierno me vas a dar azúcar de lo dulce que eso sonó

yinller

Thanks so much

yinller

Me gusta mucho mas cómo se ve esta versión xD y no te preocupes por tu inglés, ya lo vas a mejorar :) muchas gracias por entretenernos en estos dias de cuarentena. Aún me pongo a leer el comic desde cero y no me aburre y siempre me hace llorar :') gracias.

Angel Gabriel

X3 I am so happy too with this new version

yinller

Yeah i like this monti so far. I also like the slight change on why he will take care of ronnie. Its nice that its similar but differnet from the main story

Flux Y.

I like this version better

Alex Talbain