Project ST - 007
Added 2021-03-29 23:43:52 +0000 UTCI'm trying to wean myself off onomatopoeia. Took a great deal of willpower not to add a "THOOM".
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Honestly seems she’s being very careful, I’d imagine her foot coming down at full force would likely have enough power to shatter glass for quite a ways.
SeanSupreme
2021-03-31 22:16:02 +0000 UTCYour story-telling is amazing, how you convey "emotions" (or maybe "feeling for the scenery"?) with the pictures. I like that you use it for more serious things.
Paraffine
2021-03-30 10:50:43 +0000 UTCWhy? It's not like those are a bad thing, especially in, y'know, comics.
ElCid
2021-03-30 08:06:17 +0000 UTCI love ground view of what the non-titan folks have to deal with
PixelThis
2021-03-30 05:31:12 +0000 UTCSTOMP! would be the correct one. And for some reason I find "Brace for footfall" funny. Don't know why, just do.
Eugenio Moore
2021-03-30 01:48:43 +0000 UTCWhy? A THOOM would have been perfect there.
Shawn K. Younkin
2021-03-30 00:47:01 +0000 UTCReally, though, how do you onomatopoeia a single pulse of pressure change? Maybe if there's enough echoing...
McClaw
2021-03-30 00:20:20 +0000 UTCMy spelling really is god-awful XD
Phillip Jackson
2021-03-29 23:48:55 +0000 UTCSound effects are helpful (and sometimes fun), but combine the radioman's order to "brace, while showing jets of dust being flung free, really emphasizes that this is an impact you feel, not just hear.
RaisedEyebrow
2021-03-29 23:47:42 +0000 UTCGenius idea for paneling layout Also I’m wondering if something has happens to the planet’s women? Just presupposing here, no malice intended but haven’t seen any yet and I’m wondering if it might be a plot point. 🤔
Earthbound books
2021-03-29 23:47:41 +0000 UTCWoulda been totally warranted, but works nicely without it as well; they say less is more. Also, tee-hee, you said "ween".
Frist
2021-03-29 23:46:58 +0000 UTC
