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✏[WIP] My Hero Corruptions #4 - Deku x Ochaco | Dialogue

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- Project Overview

Hey there!

I would've never thought that adding the dialogue for this sequence could take almost 3 hours. As I mentioned yesterday I wrote 1 1/4 pages of dialogue that I had to fit into that sequence so I had to move the sketches around a lot. Establishing some sort of reading-flow also proved to be highly difficult based on the verticality of the picture.

Once I was finally done I only had 45 minutes left before I had to do some work for the orchestra before we had our event tomorrow. I decided to use those 45 minutes to do the backgrounds for page 31 of the Altering Curse. My drawing program normally makes auto-saves every 10 minutes if I don't save, so I wasn't mad when it crashed while I saved once I was done. The problem is, that it didn't auto-save this time, somehow my settings for that feature got reset.

Tldr: My file crashed and the backgrounds are gone again. I have to redo them on Monday.

Sorry about that, but my drawing program normally doesn't reset some of my settings.

I still hope you can enjoy the sequence in the meantime with the added dialogue. If you got any suggestions for any additions or grammar/spelling fixes be sure to tell me. I am getting better at writing english dialogue but I still got ways to go ^^

Have a nice weekend everyone!

Stay safe and see you all on Monday!

Aron

Big thanks to Jesse Taylor and UpBeat008 for pledging for the Poll Tier! Both of your support means a lot! I hope you both enjoy your stay on here! :)

✏[WIP] My Hero Corruptions #4 - Deku x Ochaco | Dialogue

Comments

All in all the dialogue seems fine to me though I think deku should have dialogue showing him fighting back even towards the end maybe him yelling at mineta while fucking uraraka. His quirk does give him some resistance to mental manipulation so that could be why he is able to back more then the others well he can fight back at least mentally he still has the physical urge to have sex. He could be against mineta during these corruptions.

Cole jones


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