Thumbnails for Ch 3, Page 118
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Comments
You're right, Klaus. I think this was a place where the actions of the character evolved for clarity during the collaboration with Adam. Something that might read clearly in a movie sometimes just doesn't play as well in comics.
Alex Woolfson
2015-04-03 20:06:44 +0000 UTCDirectly contradicting the script.
Klaus
2015-04-03 18:08:30 +0000 UTCThanks. It looks like a challenging page in general... or rather a complex one, that you guys made easy to read. However that can't have been easy to achieve. I'm going to enjoy reading it in context of a few pages either side and see how it feels different in the flow. Nice stuff!
Chris Dangerfield
2015-04-02 04:30:49 +0000 UTCThat last panel was actually a real bear, Chris -- lots going on and only so much space to show it. But wanting the bigger picture here as we kick off into the next page was a big reason I asked for the wider shot. Also, I wanted it clear that he was actually, deliberately striking with his fist them instead of just bumping his shoulder against them as he ran.
Alex Woolfson
2015-04-02 02:26:49 +0000 UTCSo interesting to see how this page evolved. Particularly the last panel. Was that wanting a bit more emo-distance btwn us and watching Duncan striking Kyle, maybe to take some emo-edge off, or more to keep us more aware of the big picture as we move into the next page? Or both? Or something entirely different? So interesting. Thanks Alex.
Chris Dangerfield
2015-04-01 13:32:19 +0000 UTC
