Script for Truth or Dare Bonus Comic, Page 14
Added 2015-06-03 02:30:35 +0000 UTCThanks to hitting our $6000/month Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.
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Comments
Thank you, Chris. Mitch is fun to write. Because of his age, he does have that balance of young and old -- real maturity to him that comes naturally, but still a lot of inexperience. And he also has a passionate desire to help people, like Kyle, but because of his experiences growing up, he pursues them much more assertively. He's a fun "hero" for me for this kind of story.
Alex Woolfson
2015-06-07 01:06:21 +0000 UTCAlex, I really enjoy reading the pages. I thought you hit a special mark with Mitch's narration here. It has the impassioned quality only a passionate teen has. His description of his NEED to help, to USE his powers in a meaningful way is emotional and descriptive and tells us a lot about who he is and is going to be. Compliments. I thought that was very well done. It makes Gordon's handling of the situation seem much more stark. We all know that when a teen spills their guts to you, even if something scares you in the specific, you never want to react in a way that drives them away. Or soon, they stop talking to you altogether. It makes this interaction even more poignant. Well done.
Chris Dangerfield
2015-06-04 01:28:46 +0000 UTC
