The Young Protectors - Legendary Chapter Two, Page 30
Added 2018-04-21 06:27:16 +0000 UTCI swear, the most difficult part of this whole “explicit story” experiment is coming up with the sex noises…
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PLEASE NOTE: These are work-in-progress colors. Vero should get me the final colors in the next few days.
So! Kyle is taking things in hand! It looks like we’re closing in on the big finish! And that magic around them just keeps getting wilder! Will Kyle finally get what he truly wants?
Tune in this Wednesday to find out! Hope to see you there!
Comments
I'm glad to hear it, George. :)
Alex Woolfson
2018-04-29 23:07:55 +0000 UTCAgreed.
Alex Woolfson
2018-04-29 23:07:42 +0000 UTCI very much like the idea in panel 3 of the two making the same noises together.
George Trosper
2018-04-25 06:26:24 +0000 UTCWriting good sex noises/dialogue is an art unto itself. As someone who enjoys both reading and writing explicit fanfic, it's definitely something I pay attention to in other stories. It can be the type of detail that draws a reader in, or takes them out of the moment with the characters.
Goodyear
2018-04-22 04:42:39 +0000 UTCgrab ass <3 <3 <3
Toruk
2018-04-21 16:04:01 +0000 UTCI dunno. I find this page a bit, uh, boring?
william clapie
2018-04-21 15:39:57 +0000 UTC
