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The Young Protectors: Double Cross Chapter One—Page 22

That would be the sensible thing to do, right, Mitch?

The only reason I’m able to keep making The Young Protectors is because of the very generous support of readers like you here on Patreon. So, I want to to send out a very special thank you and welcome to the new member of the Woolfpack this week!

Ciara M.

And I’d also like to thank a totally awesome reader who was already a Patron, but who upped his pledge this week:

Ben A.

(Thank you so much,  Ben!)

Thank you all so much for your amazing support! You and the other Patrons are all the real superheroes of this comic!

So! What is The Platinum Priestess doing with that magical artifact and these kids? Is Spooky really just going to wait for backup? And, most importantly, has anyone reached out to @syllibub to let her know that her wife is back?!

Tune in this Wednesday to find out! Hope to see you there! :D

The Young Protectors: Double Cross Chapter One—Page 22

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Thanks for that. In the comic, to me he seemed somewhat younger and totally unaware of his powers.

william clapie

Sircea was essentially immortal before the Grey Working weakened her powers, and then everything changed for her. And Duncan has been de-aged to about 15 or 16.

Alex Woolfson

It's super-helpful to me, Tami. Thank you!

Alex Woolfson

Yay! Really glad you like the update, Tami! And good catch on that line of dialogue. It was definitely a typo. I'll get that fixed. Thank you for letting me know! :)

Alex Woolfson

How much Laampros' magic affected Sircea (and Duncan) is the two million dollar question on Flyboy's mind. And we will find out. But right now, they have bigger fish to fry.

Alex Woolfson

ah i'm sorry ... translator here, worked as a proofreader for years. i can't turn it off anymore ... 🤐

Celila

Isn't Sercea nearly immortal? What would fifteen years age loss mean to her? In this I am somewhat lost. We know Duncan (may have his name wrong) "The Annihilator" lost considerably more than fifteen years. He told Kyle just a short (?) time ago that he was 58 right? Now in the YP cells or special forces cells, lost track of that, he is what, 8 or so?

william clapie

LOL. Proofreaders! Gotta love it any way ya' read it. I had to go back and read it like an eye test to see that second "to"! I just glanced over it and ignored it. In any case. Spook's don't look happy.

william clapie

wow the plot thickens!!! i love this update so much 😍😍😍 spooky asking the important questions! how much does she remember!! language question here for the 4th panel: "Maybe with the artifact... she found another way to let them to invade earth." i think i learned it's let + infinitive (without "to")... but now i'm wondering if there are exceptions and it's a construction i don't know yet. or maybe it's a typo that wasn't caught in the script? 💞💞💞

Celila

I like the incredulity in Mitch's voice: "We're just supposed to wait here?!" And I am wondering just how many years ol' PP shed - Duncan went back to fifteen or so. Did Sercea (sp I know) do the same or was she older so she didn't go back as far?

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