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Pencils for CH 4, Page 54

Thanks to hitting our very first Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see Adam DeKraker's original pencilwork in addition to the regular updates.

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Pencils for CH 4, Page 54

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The thumbnail design worked better for me. The composition and movement between the last two panels drain the flow of energy and make it look flat and motionless. Even with the out-of-panel thing that usually amplifies the movement, the angle Kyle hits him at doesn't read as the right vectors for the movement lines. It reads a bit like the opening credits to the 1960s Batman TV show where they moved cut-out drawings sideways out of nowhere.

Stephen Hutchison


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