Script for Fallen Chapter One, Page 6
Added 2019-11-02 02:34:15 +0000 UTCThanks to hitting our ninth Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.
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Comments
fuzzy vision from concentrating too much. Could have had a V8!
william clapie
2019-11-03 00:25:22 +0000 UTCVery true. :) No matter how many times I review the script before sending it to my artists, there are always typos. ("There" vs. "their" is a personal favorite of my fat fingers, apparently.) You're getting to see these scripts exactly as my artists received them. Warts and all. I'm glad you're giving them such a close read! :)
Alex Woolfson
2019-11-02 16:26:55 +0000 UTCHe couldn't "bear to watch", not "bare to watch" ... unless he's naked (which he appears not to be).
Erik Fair
2019-11-02 05:05:33 +0000 UTC
