Script for Fallen Chapter One, Page 7
Added 2019-11-06 03:30:59 +0000 UTCThanks to hitting our ninth Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.
Enjoy!
Comments
Hum. "struggling artist". Never satisfied with a finished product. I have never liked my pencils or my paintings. I have sold a couple on an auction site when none had been selling at all. Still to this day I don't like them. Night scenes, oils. Basic twenty minute paintings. So. I get the changes!
william clapie
2019-11-11 19:07:11 +0000 UTCGlad y'all think so. I felt that line of dialogue needed an upgrade.
Alex Woolfson
2019-11-09 03:15:41 +0000 UTCIt does work better.
QueBijoux
2019-11-06 14:53:35 +0000 UTCHum. A change in the script from here to the finished product. I like it.
william clapie
2019-11-06 04:09:53 +0000 UTC
