SamSuka
alexwoolfson
alexwoolfson

patreon


Script for Double Cross Chapter Two, Page 22

Thanks to hitting our ninth Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.

Enjoy!


Script for Double Cross Chapter Two, Page 22

Comments

Good stuff, thinking of them laying out studying the stars and figuring out life. I could "see" it. I have kind of been there on camping trips in the "long ago, far away" past.

william clapie

Some of us can "see" pretty well while reading. Maybe a novel would sell well to those that aren't comfortable with "gay pics"? Just a thought. I read one recently and couldn't quite figure it out. Uh, will have to look up the title, "boy 1 and boy 2 discover the universe". One boy saves another's life from a potential death by a car and then is a much loved member of that saved boys family. Very platonic. A lot of it seems to revolve around freedom of thought, IE, "be me".

william clapie

Why would you like that, William?

Alex Woolfson

Thank you, QueBijoux! Things have been so quiet in the comments on the last couple pages, I was wondering if folks weren't connecting with this scene. But it's good to hear it's working for you! I certainly try my best to make every page count. :)

Alex Woolfson

This at some point in time may be a paperback novel?

william clapie

You can tell a story is good when the scenes with characters talking/interacting are so interesting that you don’t miss the “action.” There’s been something revealed each page, and now comes the payoff.

QueBijoux


More Creators