Script for Double Cross Chapter Two, Page 22
Added 2020-02-08 03:14:18 +0000 UTCThanks to hitting our ninth Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.
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Comments
Good stuff, thinking of them laying out studying the stars and figuring out life. I could "see" it. I have kind of been there on camping trips in the "long ago, far away" past.
william clapie
2020-02-09 21:33:10 +0000 UTCSome of us can "see" pretty well while reading. Maybe a novel would sell well to those that aren't comfortable with "gay pics"? Just a thought. I read one recently and couldn't quite figure it out. Uh, will have to look up the title, "boy 1 and boy 2 discover the universe". One boy saves another's life from a potential death by a car and then is a much loved member of that saved boys family. Very platonic. A lot of it seems to revolve around freedom of thought, IE, "be me".
william clapie
2020-02-09 21:32:15 +0000 UTCWhy would you like that, William?
Alex Woolfson
2020-02-09 05:50:09 +0000 UTCThank you, QueBijoux! Things have been so quiet in the comments on the last couple pages, I was wondering if folks weren't connecting with this scene. But it's good to hear it's working for you! I certainly try my best to make every page count. :)
Alex Woolfson
2020-02-09 05:49:57 +0000 UTCThis at some point in time may be a paperback novel?
william clapie
2020-02-08 21:18:07 +0000 UTCYou can tell a story is good when the scenes with characters talking/interacting are so interesting that you don’t miss the “action.” There’s been something revealed each page, and now comes the payoff.
QueBijoux
2020-02-08 14:55:19 +0000 UTC
