Script for Double Cross Chapter Three, Page 44
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Comments
Building your own mind picture that shows a very "beaten" boy. That is what is here at the moment. Horrid image. He is beaten emotionally. Worn, weary. Far to old in many ways for a boy of about 16
william clapie
2020-09-20 02:19:31 +0000 UTCWhy do you think that is, Bill?
Alex Woolfson
2020-09-19 02:35:32 +0000 UTCjust, ouch. It seems more horrid when you read it.
william clapie
2020-09-16 19:41:36 +0000 UTC
