Script for Double Cross Chapter Four, Page 165
Added 2023-11-04 03:08:53 +0000 UTCThanks to hitting our ninth Milestone Goal, Patrons get to see my original script page now in addition to the regular updates.
Enjoy!
Comments
Still love the reading though. You would have a great series of novels here.
william clapie
2023-11-05 21:24:22 +0000 UTC"wince" with pleasure? How about closing with breathless anticipation? I get the writers (your) idea but, wince? Usually do that with pain or expecting a blow.
william clapie
2023-11-05 21:23:46 +0000 UTCYou're very welcome, Mistral! I'm really glad you like getting the chance to read what I wrote. :)
Alex Woolfson
2023-11-04 20:38:18 +0000 UTCThis is really sweet to read, and it's interesting seeing the differences between this and the final comic. Thank you for sharing it!
Mistral
2023-11-04 06:28:13 +0000 UTC
