Chapter 25 - Alpha - Lesser Demon Access
Added 2020-11-11 21:23:57 +0000 UTCFriday's chapter is here a little early! Also a complete re-write of chapter 20, so don't miss that! It's 100% better in my opinion!
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that make a lot of sense Temac and it also probably explain he's sudden attack on her
Thor Lindsgaard
2020-11-13 10:19:20 +0000 UTCI think the part was also taken out where she finds out she was summoned rather than some "demon queen" because the damn cultists said the name wrong.
Termac
2020-11-12 06:01:16 +0000 UTCI'm guessing Taniel was concerned about the alpha ralfot caving in the narrow space the rest of the way. Elania provoked it into charging at the rocks where the cave-in happened, and only leapt out of the way at the last moment, causing it to, well, test the structural integrity of the narrow channel. When he told her to get away from there, he wanted her to *lead* the alpha away from it.
Termac
2020-11-12 04:26:50 +0000 UTC"Whats his problem" feels like a MASSIVE underreaction to a sudden murder attempt that nearly succeeded. That alone nearly broke my suspension of disbeleif
Dangerkitty
2020-11-12 01:03:42 +0000 UTCWe didn't get to see that part, but you can still take that as something that would still be true if/when it comes up! Just didn't get around to it and the chapter was getting a bit long!
Erios909
2020-11-12 00:40:05 +0000 UTCLove the re-write in chapter 20! I Just missed the part where the ranger was shocked that she can exceed her powerlevel without death. But I guess all the interesting stuff doesnt need to be crampt in one chapter.
Mai0e
2020-11-12 00:08:32 +0000 UTC
