New Text Adventure! - An Unlikely Pair
Added 2021-03-19 07:10:53 +0000 UTCThis is the story of a bully and her victim, two college-bound seniors in their final months before graduating from Walkerman Jr. High School. On this one particular school day in May, their lives cross in a way that they'll both remember forever in a way neither of them ever could have expected.
Still making edits to this one, but I wanted to post (almost) on time! The next text adventure post will be Tuesday, April 6th (needed a small extension). Also look for an upcoming poll!
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Art is always good, as long as it is not ugly, because it enriches the two colorness of background and text :D
Vítězslav Konečný
2021-04-09 04:44:01 +0000 UTCI've wanted to start including art/illustrations in my games for a while, and I still plan to commission art in the future. For now, though, I just added drawings of the main characters in to the game. Let me know if you think I should add more art to my text adventures in the future!
WaferBorn
2021-04-09 01:09:52 +0000 UTCFixed all - thank you!
WaferBorn
2021-03-21 16:45:45 +0000 UTCThank you! I'm going to add to this one, for sure. The "bad variables" you're seeing are actually alternative paths to different endings which I tried to remove for the sake of time -- apparently, the removal didn't work! I'm uploading a corrected version today.
WaferBorn
2021-03-20 17:03:38 +0000 UTCIt is a good introduction to the characters and first spanking action between them, but I hope there will be more content to fill out the time between that day and graduation. truth is that ☕ bulliedVarRef is not defined► has some...feelings - lack of space after triple dot (in a lot of places, not just here) and bad variable? this much your sure of - you're (you are sure) Your thinking of what you put - You're (you are thinking) (if:)'s 1st value is a 'to' or 'into' expression, but should be a boolean.►"Ugh, Lena, you are such a bitch!" - bad variable again? You know, ☕ bulliedVarRef is not defined►? I'm not sure - bad variable again? "Yes, ☕ $VarRef is not defined►."(if:)'s 1st value is a 'to' or 'into' expression, but should be a boolean.►"W-well, no one asked you to read it!" - two bad variables You rememberthe incident - lack of space between remember and the "Yes, ☕ $VarRef is not defined►." - bad variable again?
Vítězslav Konečný
2021-03-20 08:21:58 +0000 UTC
