AAG - Chapter 50!
Added 2024-05-05 23:58:39 +0000 UTCIt's amazing just how much time, effort, and thought goes into a chapter and when you read it after its done, it flies by so quickly. Goes to show you just how much we take for granted in our lives. Virtually everything man-made we interact with was the product of an incredible amount of time and effort on the parts of many people, with a ton of ingenuity going into even the simplest things. Lol, I'm in a weird mood, can you tell? I'm happy to publish this latest chapter of AAG though. Hope you enjoy it! Let's discuss in the comments! :-) And, as always, thank you for your support!!
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I have plans, beginning in as early as Chapter 52, where Gothic might start recruiting new crew members. As awesome as Amy and Andrea are, they are not fighters, nor are they technically proficient to crew a starship. It would take years to get them up to speed, if that was even possible. Besides, I rather prefer them birthing Gothic's children in that reality and adding to the chaos.
Joseph Orlando
2024-06-11 17:25:42 +0000 UTCDang, would have liked him to take one of the sisters Amy or Andrea with him, expand the crew a bit and bring a little of his old world with him.
Big ToFu
2024-06-08 21:46:43 +0000 UTCSo any hints where Gothic going next?
Arthur Desmarais
2024-05-16 07:10:58 +0000 UTCOur Father which art in his star ship, Hallowed be thy name. Thy kingdom come, Thy will be done our earth. as it is on his Bajor. Give us this day our daily replicator ration…
maddsloth II
2024-05-15 04:28:01 +0000 UTCSo it’s more like two very powerful magnets of opposite charge that helps the drones move in atmosphere? Or more just something physical to “push off” of? Either way, I understand my idea wouldn’t be feasible and I look forward to seeing what you write for them. My idea just stems from the fact that it always bothers me that every hyper advanced alien race in our media still fights with linear propulsion in space when gravitational manipulation would offer a full range of motion from up and down to side to side instead of just back and forth ya know?
Daddy Ivan
2024-05-14 22:11:52 +0000 UTCI kind of envision the anti-grav propulsion as requiring the presence of gravity like a planet would provide. For the drones he intends for space-combat he's going to need a different propulsion method.
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-13 20:32:15 +0000 UTCGod Emperor of Mankind without even trying, dope. Have you not considered giving his ships two ways of maneuvering? Because that anti gravity technology the drones use would be insane in dogfights. Especially if he could get it into his fighter craft. Greatly looking forward to more as well
Daddy Ivan
2024-05-09 01:31:32 +0000 UTCNice. I loved the chapter. Gothic's hunter-killer drone had a perfect test. The plans to rebuild were good but I found the part where Gothic was telling stories of his adventures in the Trek Verse more entertaining.
red demon
2024-05-08 06:48:34 +0000 UTCOur Lord and Savior Gothic lol
Iori Daemona Angel
2024-05-07 19:58:57 +0000 UTCYou're welcome! And thank you so much for supporting this story!
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-07 19:49:10 +0000 UTCThe comparison is good....he is their savior, after all.
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-07 19:48:21 +0000 UTCWhen you get patreon in order to satisfy cliffhanger curiosity only for it to come back with a vengeance…. (Sigh). Thanks for the chapters!!!!
Stephen
2024-05-07 18:56:28 +0000 UTCThe end was quite good lol, Gothic became just like Jesus Christ to them.
Iori Daemona Angel
2024-05-07 14:06:40 +0000 UTCYep...and Gothic is going to realize that as some point. That said, there is a lot he's going to get out of this universe even beyond what Q had intended for him.
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-06 15:37:52 +0000 UTCYou're right and Gothic knows it. If Section 31 knew everything he has done and has access to, they might decide no amount of help is worth tolerating the risk he represents in the future. I thought about it, but part of me just wants the reader to come up with their own ideas. I may include it in the future as a brief side story. Thank you for your support!
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-06 15:37:01 +0000 UTCThank you, Jared, and thank you for your support!
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-06 15:34:18 +0000 UTCI thought about including that scene, but Amy and Andrea, despite him having a fling with them, really weren't that close with him. So I wasn't sure if it would really add much. Me too. Little does Gothic know that his flippant words and his children's adoration and loyalty to him have influenced how this world perceives him. That....may have been a mistake. This next universe is going to be a quick one because I really want something from it, but don't otherwise want to stay long, so I might have unconsciously applied that logic to not showing where he ends up. I'll give it some thought and maybe add another scene.
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-06 15:34:06 +0000 UTCVery true. I try to impress that sentiment on my children, with mixed results. Lol.
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-06 15:31:03 +0000 UTCThank you so much! That was a lovely way to put it!
Joseph Orlando
2024-05-06 15:30:12 +0000 UTCOpps the zealots at the end is a prime example of unintentional consequences of giving orders to AI who take them seriously. Great chapter otherwise.
Shane Cawley
2024-05-06 12:19:19 +0000 UTCThat ending. I'm remembering that secret intel briefing on Gothic right now and thinking what the analysts that created that would do if they saw the Walking Dead Earth. Most likely blue screen and get very drunk. With including the timeskip I think not mentioning how Gothic's kids turned out in that society is a missed opportunity. The results of Gothic soving his seed would make good side story material.
Jaroslaw Jarmul
2024-05-06 10:20:20 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Looking forward to next month’s chapter! Keep up the great work!
Jared Nelson
2024-05-06 04:07:06 +0000 UTCAlittle disappointed no real personal interaction with the people of the verse before departing would have at least liked to see the talk with Amy and Andrea Did enjoy the ending with gothic ending up a religious idol Really wish we knew where he was going next or at least was hinted at
DarkestCalling
2024-05-06 01:15:55 +0000 UTCThe older I get the more I appreciate this kind of thing we live in an era where the common man eats and knows luxuries that would make a medieval king green with envy.
Thawsta
2024-05-06 00:50:34 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! Usually I hate it when reincarnated MCs reveal that the world they’re in is really just a story in their original world, but for some reason the way you did was just … satisfying. Like releasing a breath you’ve been holding?? I’m not sure how to describe it but I loved it! Great chapter man, and keep up the good work!
Kiran Islam-Choudhury
2024-05-06 00:39:06 +0000 UTC
