Poll about the possible continuation of the MCP at the Office PAI
Added 2023-08-09 09:33:48 +0000 UTCHello, Hexxet here,
So, "The Master Control Program at an Office" - PAI finally got released today. After you've "played" it through I'd like to know if you liked it and if you'd want me to continue it in one or another way or if I should do something different.
There was one Scene in this PAI where you can actively use the MCP to change Clarissa. This leads to 16 Endings that only vary slightly in Clarissa's behavior and the size of her boobs. All of this takes up about 100 pages. It's purpose was to give you - the reader - a feeling of using the MCP yourself. Whether that worked out and you liked that I wanna know ;).
Due to to number of endings (and the Clarissa Scene) the paths of this story got a bit short. I am aware of this and I wrote it with the intention of possible extending this story either by linear PAI's or a follow up Interactive PAI Book, if you like that. Let me know if I should continue this story in one way or another, or if I stick to the MCP theme or if I should think of something new for the next PAI-Book. :)
This is a multi-option-poll. You can click multiple answers if you want to.
If you have anything else on your mind concerning this PAI-Book let me know in the comments :)
Comments
I guess some different poses and/or expressions for Clarissa in accordance with her mental attribute changes (like more obedient or adoring/blushing) would have made this scene more interesting. (Sadly this is super hard to create with the AI engine without turning the girl into a completely different girl :C). Totally get where you are coming from. I too feel like the story feels short. I have to admit I got overwhelmed by the power of the MCP. The Clarissa Scene turned out super long, and in general the Endings split too soon in this PAI Book while in OF:BF we had a rather long intro story and Endings branching off rather slowly (in comparison ^^). Not into FD myself, but it felt right to have some bad endings in an MCP story :). Unless these poll results change completely (which I doubt) I will continue this story with a linear PAI in the near future. Do you have a favorite Ending from which onward you'd like to see this story continue? :)
Hexxet
2023-08-12 07:45:03 +0000 UTCI think these interactive PAI are great, The way you can interact with the picture makes you feel like a part of the story not just reading it. I do feel the story felt too short to get into it. The 16 Ending Clarissa Scene was too repetitive. Don't get me wrong I loved the interactive part of how you gave the option to choose how we want it, it's just that some of the scenes look the same. The FD endings were not my kind of thing but it was nice to have, gotta have some bad endings. With everything said I was hoping more for an expansion of this story, like see more of the changes that can be done to the office.
DZone
2023-08-12 06:57:13 +0000 UTCSeeing those were all FD oriented I probably won't be doing anything like that anytime soon. But I do enjoy myself those oblivious reality change stories from a girl's point of view. Maybe I'm gonna write something like that next...
Hexxet
2023-08-10 11:39:25 +0000 UTCAmazing as always, loved the endings where the intern made changes without you making them yourself and you had to dela with it. More unaware / forced reality change would be incredible!
Belle Hunter
2023-08-10 11:15:52 +0000 UTC
