Coming Friday... MC Trance Trigger III
Added 2024-03-09 07:00:06 +0000 UTCHello, Hexxet here,
Happy to finally bring to you the third chapter of MC Trance Trigger.
Plot: After David has used Melinda's trigger to turn her into his adoring girlfriend it is now time to meet her mother Vanessa. Melinda fears that her mother will not approve of David, but he is not concerned. After all, Vanessa attended the same hypnosis show Melinda did!
This chapter will have ~60 pages and I hope you are looking forward to it.
Comments
Ha-ha, that's true. -> I'll fix it for the final version.
Hexxet
2024-03-11 18:55:10 +0000 UTCLooking forward to this, but you may want to consider changing Melinda's character description from "virgin" to "ex-virgin." Whatever term you use, this definitely feels like a time to call for a crossoff.
BioSteam
2024-03-11 16:58:40 +0000 UTC
