Transform or Command 09
Added 2024-04-26 20:56:51 +0000 UTCHello, Hexxet here,
Phew! I made it in time. It's still Friday (CET) ^^. I messed up the part of this chapter where Lana gets ToCed on my first implementation. I had her choose transform even though she had been transformed twice in a row already. Darn! Had to redo that, so that's one of the reason why I'm late posting this one :).
Gotta admit, finding back into the story after this break was a bit tough, but the story is back on it's way now and I'm looking forward to finish it i the near future. (We'll continue with monthly releases til it's end.)
Plot: We join our players (except Vadim) in the frat room where everyone is pretty excited about Amara's new size. Nicole is suspicious, Liz is baffled, Dylan chuckles knowingly and Lana... Lana freaks out... as always (in this comic ^^).
This comic is 65 pages long but there are no pinups. I was running a deadline here! :)
This Comic is accessible to Enthusiast Members or higher on the homepage until the series ends.
I hope you are still interested in this series and are looking forward to its endgame. :)
Comments
Definitely! Nothing better than some friends and rivals with their hands on some magical mayhem plot-device to lay bare their most kinky desires and mean comebacks :P
Jakken Haggar
2024-04-28 21:49:18 +0000 UTCThanks :) I really think the emotional reactions of the characters is what makes this one special :). And yeah, for Lana's ToC, Amara had not many points left to change her anyway and the story just needed to edge her a little so she would retaliate on Amara and bond with Nicole :) But yeah, the shrinking was my default idea. Damn those rules! ^^
Hexxet
2024-04-28 19:39:02 +0000 UTCWhat an awesome chapter and story overall! Love how you write that change-game driven quarrel with all the toc’s, while still keeping the characters true to themselves (or as the control part allows) and the story coherent to the rulebook. Really wished that Lana’s shrink would have been canon though and a few inches more, as this really made sense for a reaction but mostly because I’d really loved to see the further outcome of this. But at least we got it as an alternative at least, thanks :) Hyped for every continuation of this story, keep it up
Jakken Haggar
2024-04-28 18:42:10 +0000 UTCThe alternate scene has been posted now. It's nothing special, but maybe you will enjoy it :)
Hexxet
2024-04-27 07:24:02 +0000 UTCIs it possible, that you will release those wrongly rendered images as an alternative timeline?
randomprofile
2024-04-27 06:05:32 +0000 UTCWell, with Amara's Anti Karma maxed her current state will be easily amended by Dylan in the next chapter. So yeah some BE planned before the endgame chapter :). (story will be ~2-3 more chapters long i guess)
Hexxet
2024-04-26 21:42:15 +0000 UTCOh no... BR makes me always sad 😥 But I´m very happy to see this new chapter and am happily awaiting the next one (hopefully with some nice BEs 😁😉)
unimportant
2024-04-26 21:29:34 +0000 UTC
