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Poll: What did you like/dislike about Remote Beach? Beach Remote?

Hello, Hexxet here,

"Remote Beach? - Beach Remote!" Has been out for a few day now and I wanted to ask you about several aspects of this comic, where you like them or whether I should avoid that in the future. If you haven't read it yet, it's freely available to everyone on my homepage here.

Now the aspects I want your opinion on are:

Graphics/Comic Style: This PAI uses a completely different style from my usual PAIs. It's more cartoony I guess, but I really like it and I think it got some great acceptance on my public pages. Now I don't plan to switch to this style completely. Actually I'm not sure if I can even replicate exactly for different situations :), but I certainly would like to add this style to my repertoire and do like one PAI in this style each month.

Storytype: Now this comic is not only lacking an elaborate story, but actually any story whatsoever, which is also quite different from my usual comics. It' basically just a collection of stand alone pics, connected by the thin setting of losing a magic remote and the same theme of BE. I feel like that has its own charm but I heard on several occasion already that you guys enjoy my stories and prefer more story over single pics. Now I don't know if that holds for this comic, or if I managed to make this interesting enough for you. Again, I do not intend to do only such single pic collection themed comics. The question is only about maybe doing one comic in this story-type of style each month or every other.

ESF/Embarrassed-Screaming-Female: The women in this comic are depicted in a state of surprise and shock as their breasts expand and their clothes rip. I think the expressions fit the situation well, and I think it's a refreshing change from the usual reality change where the breast expansion is simply accepted as normal. But you might be turned off by it, I don't know. So what I want to know is if this is something you like seeing or if I should rather avoid it in the future. Now, obviously I won't be able to do such expressions for sex scenes as this would go into the R-territory, but adding a bit more fear/surprise in some magical situations beforehand might be reasonable.

Breast-Size: Now personally I think breasts turned out beautifully for this comic, and are the perfect size for a BE story. PS: I'm not talking about Page 14 and 39! I know those are too big... but the pics where kinda funny I believe... So, aside from Page 14&39, I'd like to know what you think about the Breast-Size used in this comic.

Please consider the questions about these aspects separately from one another, cause I can most likely do the same graphic style but with a real story, or use this story-type with a realistic style. ESF can also be used in various graphic styles I guess, though more realistic styles might make it too realistic - not sure... Of course, if there is anything else you want to let me know about this comic, you can let me know in the comments! :)

This is a Multi-Vote, you can check as many options as you want, though I would ask you to only check one for each of the three topics above ;).

Comments

Well, it was a Breast Expansion - themed collection so the lack of mental transformation is only natural, but of course such a remote would be perfect for MC as well :). Part 2 will be more of the same as it's already done, but I hear you, I'll stay with real stories in the future ;).

Hexxet

I actually liked the chaos quite a lot. I think the shocked expressions were a little overdone, however. And I wish there had been more actual mental transformation. I also agree on the lack of focus. I'd like to see it be a bit more cohesive next time.

AliC

Yup, that's exactly what this is. I was trying out something completely different with this one and it's okay if people dislike it :). I thought people might appreciate the higher density of BE these captions offer (as each pic is a BE-Pinup) and there are no story pages in between. But I guess I'll go back to what I do best - writing stories :). I'm glad though that the comic style is not disliked (so far), cause I really want to do more with it. :)

Hexxet

I have problems with the story: this is more like putting captions on pictures than a story. Seams like most of the people agree that a connected story would be better. Everything else I like, visuals and the idea are great. And the Boob size is not too big!

omp

Oh, by the way. No matter this poll's results there will be a second part to this comic int he exact same style/type/ESF/Breast-Size, since it's already complete. But from then on out I will heed your votes ;).

Hexxet


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