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The Kingswoood Complication - Chapter 5

Wednesday 14 September 2022

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You know David has grown up so much since year 7 and best of all is he feels like a part of the team and that he fits. He certainly holds his own in the group. Danny and Avery is going to become fascinating to watch. Does Avery blink first and give in understanding Danny isn’t going to hurt him or does Danny blink first and just beat the little shit HaHa.

John Warren

Yup, it was something I deliberated a lot, and considered some alternatives mostly to avoid being predictable, but eventually this way just made sense. That said, just because they've gone this way now doesn't mean that's how it's always going to stay! The explosion and subsequent refurbishment was never intended to be an excuse to change the layout of the building, but when it happened I realised it was too good a chance to miss. I planned the layout right back when I was starting book one, and didn't understand the school fully yet myself. Being able to redeisgn it with a few years of experience really was a blessing.

Matthew Smith

I also note for the record that apparently my second prediction version in the comments after Chapter 3 -- namely Chris-Danny-Nicky-Mikey -- appears to have been correct. But I do like the fact that both halves of the suite are apparently well connected so things like nocturnal visits would not be difficult . . .

Rutabaga


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