The Kingswood Complication - Chapter 18
Added 2024-09-20 16:00:01 +0000 UTCSunday 20 November 2022 (conti
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“I don’t know what’s wrong with me,” he whimpered as he felt Mr Rudd hold him. That makes two of us.
Rutabaga
2024-09-22 00:31:03 +0000 UTCThis time the story is told more from Mr. Rudd's point of view. That's new
Mr Luigi
2024-09-21 18:18:08 +0000 UTCI love the little scence with Josh and Mark. They are so in love 🥰
Mr Luigi
2024-09-21 17:57:51 +0000 UTCHaha sorry, but it's wonderful to see the storyline is touching you so much. It was a very important one to me, so hearing it's being appreciated is wonderful. As for the bullying, this kind is really interesting because it's not the usual 'someone being a bully and doing mean stuff'. It's banter, it's playful, it's friends rather than enemies. Danny may not even realise (or feel) like he is being bullied and the ones inflicting it probably don't even realise they're hurting him. That's what makes this kind of bullying so insidious. But don't worry, you'll be happy in the end :)
Matthew Smith
2024-09-21 14:08:44 +0000 UTCI don't set out to make you cry, but if you do then I know I'm doing something right lol. Rob and Milo are interesting because both being at Kingswood means they're in a an entirely new dynamic for their brotherhood. I'm sure they'll figure it out soon and nothing else will ever go wrong... *innocent whistle* Josh and Mr Rudd are a really intriguing pair to write. They've already come such a long way since they first met, and hopefully they still have a lot more ahead of them. Time will tell! Mr Rudd and Danny though, they're quite different... definitely challenging times ahead for them both!
Matthew Smith
2024-09-21 14:05:59 +0000 UTCAww, I'm really glad to hear someone remembers Jesse. I really loved their friendship. Mr Rudd and Danny certainly have interesting times ahead. As for David and James, they're just so adorably sweet, I love writing any scene they're in together.
Matthew Smith
2024-09-21 14:02:25 +0000 UTCOh my god, you have to stop this stuff with Josh…you have to rewrite anything dealing with him. It’s so unfair. Such a great attitude and yeah his smile lets everyone know he is good…thankfully he can take down the facade with Mr. Rudd. But seriously, this whole line needs to stop. When are we ever going to deal with the bullying that Danny deals with. You know from my distaste of Leo, that I don’t do bullies, period!
John Warren
2024-09-21 03:10:36 +0000 UTCJust determined to make me cry every chapter now, aren't you? I think Mark is a little more sure of his feelings now. But I'm really worried about Danny. And I need Rob and Milo to get things worked out. I'm glad Josh has Mr. Rudd to be totally open with about his feelings. You know, I wasn't a real fan of Mr. Rudd when he first came, but he has proven himself with how he has helped Josh and is trying to help Danny.
Rich
2024-09-20 22:29:58 +0000 UTCBack to the lovely chapter now! Danny used the same way in year 7 to torment himself when he doesn't know how to deal with his feelings. It was Jesse looking out for him in year 7 (and that's probably one of the most sweet moments in Kingswood saga), and now Mr. Rudd. Curious to see how Mr. Rudd would handle this. Also, the David-James session is pretty funny!
Johnny Kape
2024-09-20 17:18:30 +0000 UTC
