Redraw - 18
Added 2020-12-18 02:38:31 +0000 UTCThis new take might be controversial! Looking back, I had tried to integrate too much of the Toriyama design elements, for the face, it just wasn't my "style", so this time I though I'd just go ahead and revamp that whole area! The second issue was with the energy blast that vaporized her clothes, I remembered that I always wanted the composition to play on the original idea but back then I couldn't make it work.
I know why now, I kinda screwed myself with the positioning of the figure, the angle didn't allow for a realistic background with comical beam damage like I had imagined, so I added those panels instead. It wasn't a bad solution, here however I chose to use that damage behind her to enhance the shape dynamic in a more abstract way.
I know some of you will like the old one better, I experimented a bit here and the result is a bit more raw and gritty, perhaps at the cost of appeal'
Cheers'
Comments
I'm just sad the pit fuzz got singed off this time! Both are nicely done and have their merits. It's hard to say that I like one more than the other
Obstrepera
2020-12-18 04:15:23 +0000 UTC
