Poll: Should I commission this artist?
Added 2021-12-13 03:39:59 +0000 UTC
So this is an artist that I contacted a week ago. Since we’re close to Christmas and I didn’t want to pay for a scene that I might not use, I decided to make him draw some kind of fan art instead.
Obviously, as you can see, the art is very different from the art in the game, which is one of the reasons why I wanted to make a poll about it; to see how people feel. I have my suspicions about the general consensus, but it’s still fun to have everyone’s opinion either way.
The two main reasons why I commissioned this artist is because I really love his coloring, and also because he seems to be able to handle animation. My main concern with his art style is that the girls seem young. The faces are rather round and the eyes are big.
His good points are that he’s affordable, quick, he does great coloring, and he can do animation (I think). His bad point is that his art might be incompatible with the current art.
The poll is only open for 24 hours since I don’t want to leave the guy hanging.
Vote for what you believe is best. I personally don't mind. Either way, the art is cute. Here are a few variations of the expressions:


Comments
I feel the style works much better with Aya than Laura, since she has a much younger vibe. In those scenarios where there is a reasonable choice, this artist could prefer making art of Aya rather than Laura
Nemris
2022-01-24 14:17:36 +0000 UTCAgree, This is amazing art but my two concerns are Lauras face looking too young, and ayas tits seem a little bigger than what i came to think they where, i’m not sure aya boobs are the size you originally meant them to be but i would appreciate a smaller size for her.
Amir Yordi
2021-12-14 11:07:32 +0000 UTCIt seems majority voted yes. I'd like to see how this is incorporated with the game. The artwork is too different imo. Are there other samples that you're able to provide?
Sitri
2021-12-14 03:42:24 +0000 UTCYES!
2021-12-13 18:18:30 +0000 UTCAlso agree with this aswell Aya due to her childish demeanor fits the design very well, however, I also agree that Laura should have a more mature kind of look since she is older.
Gang stuff
2021-12-13 14:44:06 +0000 UTCI will vote yes as well, but as some others already mentioned there are some mayor concerns for me as well. Generally I like it a lot that you want to implement more art into the game. I think that the only thing A Promise best left unkept is lacking a bit is additional art/CGs. So I really, really appreciate that you want to add more artists and therefor more art. Great! Still my concern when looking at the CGs in this post (which are done fairly well) is, that the character of the MCs isnt pictured very well and thus having a somehow bad impact on the game. So I would also really recommend you to have some serious talks with the new artist to try to really almost copy especially the faces of the two female MCs. Please stick to the draft and the lore. Another option would be that the new artist only makes backgrounds, other art or scenes where the face is not seen. But really the faces of the original artist give so much character to the female MCs, it would be really bad to mix that up I think...
Pete
2021-12-13 11:15:24 +0000 UTCI voted yes to this, however I strongly advise mentioning to the creator that Laura seems a little young (teenage Aya is totally fine, but Laura definitely needs some fine tuning) and encourage him to take this into account with future art. Maybe the artist will be willing to provide some quick sample face-only change just to be sure we are all on the same page.
Venom
2021-12-13 10:18:05 +0000 UTCOnly thing im not 100% about is Laura's face, she looks too childish. Not like a boss babe that is projecting confidence and sternness
Zoppie
2021-12-13 07:02:36 +0000 UTCLaura looks a teen
Adolfo
2021-12-13 06:13:16 +0000 UTCWhile the art style maybe different they're still keeping the proportions in tact as in everything seemed smaller with the 2nd artist in The edge of. Here it's more a tone style difference than tone and proportion and color. Also like you said i really like this artists coloring so I'm all for it hopefully this poll turns out in a yes!
Loewe
2021-12-13 04:44:13 +0000 UTCI like it, definitely right the colouring is great, and has a good handle on emotive faces. Without a competing example I say go with it. Hopefully can do good Ahegao <3
Smoolio
2021-12-13 04:38:20 +0000 UTCI agree that the artwork is very different. They look like chubby teenagers in these samples. Lol. The artwork is very nice though.
Sitri
2021-12-13 04:00:27 +0000 UTC