One year anniversary of A Promise Best Left Unkept, and how to celebrate it
Added 2022-09-18 00:36:14 +0000 UTCNext month will mark a whole year since I released V0.1.0 of A Promise Best Left Unkept. I first want to thank every single one of you for still supporting me. I know it's not easy for everyone with the current economy, so I feel really fortunate to be able to work on what I love full time.
I also want to point out that I have yet to miss a single month; I've been able to release an update every month since I first created this Patreon page. I'm proud of that fact, even though it pretty much means the death of my social life. I'll probably take a break… soon… one day… probably… *cough* *cough*…
For the first-year anniversary of A Promise Best Left Unkept, at first, I wanted to commission a custom art like I did in the past, but then I felt like it was a bit of a waste of both money and opportunity (not to mention, it's not very original). So instead, I decided that I would like to do something special.
I've been toying with this idea for a while. I've been meaning to create a higher Patreon Tier with access to bonus scenes. But I don't like when bonus scenes that add to the story are behind a paywall. So instead of writing scenes that are directly related to the story, my idea was that people would write their own desired scene in the comment section on a thread, and then, depending on the number of upvotes (or heart, in Patreon case), I would take the five ideas that are the most popular and run a poll with them. The idea that wins would then become a scene of 1k to 3k words that I would write, and implement the next month. The goal would be to release a new bonus scene every two months in a perfect world.
The first month -> idea gathering + vote
The second month -> write + implement
Those bonus scenes would then be exclusive to that higher tier for at least a month before maybe trickling down to lower tiers. Though, if it does, maybe they will be web-only for the lower tiers. I'm not sure yet. I would want those scenes to be exclusive to this Patreon page if I'm being honest.
The thing is, I don't know if I'm biting more than I can chew. I want to be sure that I can deliver something that's worth it, at least. Which is why I want to try it out with everyone at first. It would be a good way to test the idea and also a good way to celebrate the first year of A Promise Best Left Unkept. Every tier would also have access to this particular scene.
So the rules are simple. If you have an idea, no matter what it is, you write it in the comment section. Make sure it's a first-level comment (don't reply to a comment with an idea). I don't want anything too specific. I'm not here to be your personal writer, I want to have fun writing the scene as well, or else it might show in my writing. I want small, concise sentences.
Ultimately, what I want to know is:
Who: who is fucking who (Threesome max/The characters must be from the game)
Where: where are they fucking
How: A description of the scene (A single sentence, if possible)
When: If there's a specific period of time that this scene takes place relative to the game, you can add it. Else, skip this.
Outfit: If the character is wearing a specific outfit, else skip this.
Position: The sexual position. If you can, add an image for clarity purposes. I'm not in your head.
Why: This is for the intent. If there's a specific reason behind the act, specify it.
Here's an example of the kind of description that I want. Please, copy the form so it's easier for me:
Who: Laura and Luca
Where: In Harry's living room
How: Harry is watching porn on the TV, or at least he thinks he is, but actually Laura and Luca are in a big box in form of a giant television, fucking in front of him. (please, not something too hard to draw. My artists would kill me)
When: After Laura and Harry married in the Family ending.
Outfit: Laura is disguised as a pig
Position: Full nelson - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1sChtRokTGdH1J4cdQpG81I-yCQ0t0tIY&authuser=sagesssama%40gmail.com&usp=drive_fs
Why: Laura's dream has always been to be a literal television.
There might be things that I've forgotten. I'm not sure. Don't be surprised if some ideas are dismissed because of their unfeasibility. Also, please keep in mind that if you write something weird like gay sex between Harry and Luca, I might not be able to do it. I don't think my artists would be very pleased with me. Another thing, but this scene won't be animated—at least, it won't be a fluid animation.
By the way, this is also a good way to see a scene that *might* have happened at the end of one of the endings.
I will run a poll with the five ideas that have the most upvote (hearts) in five days. So you have five days to come up with an idea and vote. If there are more than five ideas with the same number of upvotes, five out of those will be chosen at random.
Hopefully, I can deliver the scene next month, though please keep in mind that, again, I might be a fucking idiot biting more than I can chew.
Also, please share your thought on the idea as a whole (with the higher tier and everything). Depending on your opinions, I might change some things, or just give up on the idea completely. Your thoughts are really important to me.
One last thing, but be careful not to write spoilers in your comments, if possible. More precisely about this month's update since not everyone has played it.
I'm sure I won't regret this idea in a day... right?
Comments
I might be too late for this but yea just gonna assume this would give an idea for the dev Who: Luca, Maya, and Laura Where: Luca’s room How: Luca invited maya to a threesome, while Maya is probably already corrupted, this would add a justification for Laura to trashtalk and less feels guilty betraying Harry. It's because she just found someone like her and starting to think its normal. These girl will then agree about how shitty is Harry and how good is Luca at pleasuring woman. This scene can add a potential how Laura starting to enjoy bullying Harry. When: probably nearing the ending where Laura start to hate Harry Outfit: just the usual sex, probably let the two girls meet in a super lewd outfit Position: the usual sex position Why: to progress Laura’s corruption. Which succeeds and she thinks about Luca’s superior cock instead of Harry’s (i copy this from british lion) and add reason to betray and see how pathetic Harry is. And i think Maya has potential because she already has a standing picture.
Andika sylvester
2022-09-24 03:39:06 +0000 UTCWho:luca and aya Where: luca apartment How: Harry is locked in a closet with his hands, feet and mouth tied, after being beaten by Luca, he went to confront him since he discovered that he was blackmailing Aya to do certain things. The scene deals with Aya's training..., Luca drugs her with a drink, blackmailing her, and starts fucking her, first using her mouth, putting her on her knees and grabbing her hair in front of the closet where Harry is, and then fucking her (Luca standing, picking up aya and fucking her against the wardrobe) the scene would end with aya submissively kissing luca's feet... admitting that she is superior to harry... Oufit: yellow dress Position: estanding lifting aya When: After Laura and Harry married in the Family ending. Why: Aya is invited to Luca's apartment to settle her affairs, because of her photo..
2022-09-21 18:22:08 +0000 UTCWho: Luca and Maya Where: Luca’s room How: Luca has taken Maya to his room to help explain what his is going to corrupt Laura to which she accepts. To try and make Laura think about Luca being superior. When: during one of the scenes that Harry and Laura share a bed but after Luca has started messing with Laura. Outfit: naked Position: Luca is pushing Maya into the wall next to Harry’s bed and fucking her from behind and cream pies her pussy. Why: to progress Laura’s corruption. Which succeeds and she thinks about Luca’s superior cock instead of Harry’s.
British Lion
2022-09-21 15:00:08 +0000 UTCLet’s try my hand at this: The idea behind this is to get a sex scene showing off Laura’s nipple piercings in the “Let’s make a family” ending where Harry is oblivious to Laura’s corruption into a slut. Who: Luca is fucking Laura Where: In the hotel where Luca got Laura to Dogeza to him and beg for sex. How: Luca and Laura have just gotten back from getting her nipples pierced, as Luca demanded, and Luca wants to fuck Laura to ingrain her sex slave status into her brain. When: After Laura Dogeza’d to Luca, following getting her nipples pierced but before they left to tell Harry about Laura’s new desire to have Luca help her “exercise”. Outfit: Laura has the sexy outfit that she had on before the pencil blue dress in this ending. The one with the exposes panties that has yet to be used in a sex scene (Her daily around the house clothing that she uses once she starts back with the long blond hair in this ending). Position: Something like this is good as it shows both Laura’s pussy and pierced nipples: https://rule34.xxx//samples/5864/sample_1e9b1e93239ada03c8387654567ea043b68b166d.jpg?6666443 Note that we should see Laura’s pierced nipples as that is a large focus of this scene. Why: Luca needs to force Laura to understand that she is his sex slave and the pierces are physical proof of this fact. Laura will succumb to this fact and her slut transformation will continue further.
Vulcan64
2022-09-21 00:52:30 +0000 UTCWho: laura's mom , laura and Luca Where: at the office How: Laura's mom finds out about Luca's deal with Laura and goes over to "talk" Outfit: Laura without underwear and a toy in the pussy Position : with Laura's mom standing full Nelson. https://rule34.xxx//samples/5144/sample_fb161477bb04977d389a61e1782600e3.jpg?6178310 Why: luca sends a pic to laura's mom or something like that Before Laura's mom came to the office. luca gave Laura a creampie and plugged it with the toy and laura would walk around with the creampie inside. (Eventually it would leak out on the floor) https://rule34.xxx//samples/4138/sample_8b1b0b2d8b2e3fbdd15ac3d14864d97a.jpg?4717424 Luca would blackmail Laura's mom to have sex with him and luca would creampie her to. Then laura would walk in see it and eat the cum out of her mother's pussy
buddy99
2022-09-20 14:44:33 +0000 UTCWho: Laura and 2 of the old co-workers. Coworkers can be faceless which will hopefully make the artwork a bit easier. Where: In the office bathroom How: Luca brings Laura into the office and shares her amongst the other guys in there. Maybe throws some drugs at Laura to break her to a complete slut (really liked the use in edge of night on Beth) When: After the 2nd ending where Laura cheats on Harry indefinitely with Luca. Won't spoil any of the other scenes and follows along with the concept of Laura constantly spiraling lower and lower into a slut. Outfit: Her good ole office outfit. Was great, can be used to trick Harry into a feel of somewhat normalcy while she approaches the coworkers in a familiar manner. Position: https://us.rule34.xxx/thumbnails/5910/thumbnail_b5b855b38121387a39d02d815e82ebbdd565e241.jpg?6715143 Really enjoyed the scene where Laura fucked Luca and made out with Harry. But now it's dick in both ends. Why: Luca is starting to grow tired of Laura as she degenerated into just a slut, so he decided to stop fucking her and threw her at other men to torture Harry even further by getting the entire office in on it. As to why personally, I really wanted to see some Aya/Laura action, but I also don't want to spoil anything that can interfere with any other part of the story. With this scene, I think it'd be hot, continue off of a line you already finished, and involve people that aren't part of the main plot.
Plee
2022-09-20 05:01:11 +0000 UTC...and one more Who: Laura, Luca, and Harry (watching) Where: In Luca's new office How: Luca introduces Harry to his new secretary (Laura in disguise) right before their meeting and asks the secretary to give him a blowjob during the meeting under his desk, explaining to Harry that this is part of normal secretary work at his company. After their meeting finishes, Luca sends Harry away to begin round 2. When: After Laura and Harry married in the Family ending. Outfit: Laura in a slutty secretary outfit & wig Why: Luca and Luara just fucking with Harry's mind
2022-09-20 00:50:27 +0000 UTCOk, i'll bite: Who: Laura, Luca, and Harry (watching) Where: In a 'happening bar' or basically a sex club of sorts How: Luca decides to 'celebrate' Harry now working under him by taking him to a sex club to have some 'fun'. There, he decides make a show of fucking Laura in front of him in disguise with Harry oblivious (and looking nervous) When: After Laura and Harry married in the Family ending. Outfit: Laura is disguised with a mask + different hair style than normal Why: Luca and Luara just fucking with Harry's mind
2022-09-20 00:41:16 +0000 UTCNo Harry and Luca? :( Oh, how the mighty Lurry ship sinks, at the wiles of The One Cat. With one paw he giveth, with the other he taketh away. I'm a sucker for anything Christmas (also beach episodes), so I'll take my chance to ask for a scene I hoped would have made it into the game (maybe it still can?): Who: Luca and Laura (optional addition of either Sandra or even Aya, if the Author decides to be kinkier ;) ) Where: In Harry's house, in a room next to him or maybe upstairs How: Harry and Trevor are opening presents while Luca and Laura are "making" a present for Harry ;) When: Christmas after the Family ending, either right after or maybe even after the second child Outfit: Luca wearing a Santa costume (beard included) and Laura wearing an elf nightie together with elf ears and an elf hat, maybe even programmer socks Position: I'll leave it up to the kitty to decide it, I'm most turned on by the action itself, the position matters less to me personally Why: Because they want to give Harry a nice Christmas present, of course. Why else ;) I think it would be very hot if either Aya (even if it would make little sense in the story) or Sandra would be involved as well, as long as Laura gets pregnant again. The scenario itself is of most importance to me, them having "fun" on Christmas while Harry entertains the kids obliviously. I really appreciate that you're doing this, HS, even if it doesn't end up working out as well as you might have hoped. You're always trying to go out of your way to make it nicer for us, and I hope you have fun with this, even if it ends up being a bit too much work. I'm sure whatever idea wins that you'll find a way to have fun with it!
Kenathon
2022-09-19 11:27:38 +0000 UTCSince right now there seems to be a lack of ideas, I think it can be two ideas per person.
hangovercat
2022-09-19 08:02:23 +0000 UTCCan we only write one?
British Lion
2022-09-19 07:50:57 +0000 UTCWho: Laura's mom and Luca Where: Luca's room How: Laura's mom finds out about Luca's deal with Laura and goes over to "talk" When: After the first time Laura and Luca fucked in the hotel. Outfit: Standard casual attire Position: mating press https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=6687243 Why: She doesn't feel laura's reason for cheating on harry justifies her actions. Like how she cheated on laura's father.
Loewe
2022-09-18 18:18:40 +0000 UTChaha this is as marvel's What If...? good, who: Laura, aya, and Luca where: on a bed. how: a threesome, luca is filming a video to harry. When: during the time where luca and aya were dating and Laura and Luca's relationship was advanced. Outfit: Laura and aya has a lingiere (author's imagination.) and they have a drawing on the butt that says something derogatory towards harry. Position: laura and aya are giving a double blowjob to luca. why: Laura and aya are already corrupted. PD: sorry for my english.
2022-09-18 18:12:51 +0000 UTCGot it. You can always edit your post in order to comply with the rule by the way. As long as you keep the idea close to the same, I think the upvotes should still count.
hangovercat
2022-09-18 17:57:26 +0000 UTCFair enough. Probably better to specify that in the "who" section though. I think it's easy to miss the edit.
2022-09-18 17:44:04 +0000 UTCWho: Luca is fucking Laura Where: In the forest by the edge of a beach/Pool. How: Harry, Laura, Luca and Aya are doing another small business-related trip, and Luca insists they use the opportunity to hit the nearby beach/pool, which provides Luca with the opportunity to fuck swimsuit Laura. When: After/Around the video call conference segment of the story. Outfit: Laura has a bikini swimsuit Position: https://rule34.xxx//samples/5864/sample_1e9b1e93239ada03c8387654567ea043b68b166d.jpg?6666443 Why: Always awesome to get a swimsuit episode; would provide Aya the opportunity to use one of those selfie swimsuits.
Nemris
2022-09-18 17:17:54 +0000 UTCUnfortunately, you can't use a character that is not in the story. Harry's mom does exist, but I haven't created her—I don't have a sprite of her or anything. And I don't plan to think of a character appearance for the sake of a bonus scene. Sorry about that. I guess I should have been clearer about it in the rules.
hangovercat
2022-09-18 17:08:27 +0000 UTCWho: Laura and Luca Where: Ready room before the wedding? Something with a bed When: Cheating with Luca just before the Wedding Outfit: Wedding dress (I prefer purple hair variant, but not important, you decide!) Position: Missionary? I know I'm boring! Not sure, makes it more personal, but really anything goes. I know something similar was posted, but anyways x)
Artimec
2022-09-18 17:00:15 +0000 UTCI think this is a very, very good idea, provided you can keep it manageable and people are interested. Not biting more than you can chew as you said, so definitely test it out and maybe consider making it more spaced out than every 2 months if you think you need it. I think it would give a very solid bang for the buck for the highest patrons. If implementing this does not work out in the middle of Promise, you can always revive this idea again when you start your next game in the far future.
Nemris
2022-09-18 16:45:22 +0000 UTCWell, let me give this a try. Who: Laura and Luca Where: Bathroom How: Hidden sex in the bathroom stall When: Right before Ending #2 Family (Obliviousness). Position: Standing sex. Why: hidden sex + pregnancy sex + pierced nipples. It should show both Harry and Laura POV. The "excuse" could that Laura became too self-conscious of her pregnant body to allow to Harry see it, leading to some sex possibilities with Luca.
Cláudio
2022-09-18 16:09:12 +0000 UTCNo, we didn't meet her. But I think Laura's mom isn't with her husband and Harry's mom might be, for one. Plus, I think there's a stronger corruption element with Harry's mom than Laura's.
2022-09-18 14:10:35 +0000 UTCHarrys mom? Did we meet her I remember lauras mom but harrys?
Loewe
2022-09-18 13:35:39 +0000 UTCI second that wholeheartedly 😏
Jaden123
2022-09-18 02:53:30 +0000 UTC