FYI you missed a word in the first panel, suspect it should be 'I'm going' to 'spend all day'
Thomas Gray
2015-06-25 23:28:52 +0000 UTC
End of Player 1's first speech bubble, line 4, missing "to".
Getting the half-million-dollar kickstarter dealt with leaves you with little time to edit your own work, so we, your grateful fans, will take up that burden!