Also, the last speech bubble in the bottom panel has "... why they'v held..." -- There's an 'e' missing there.
Sorry for us pointing out grammar and spelling mistakes, Tim. ;)
Brian Dickens
2018-06-02 13:13:33 +0000 UTC
Tim, I don't think that "it could it be" is grammatically correct. You might might consider dropping one of the "it"'s.