Valentine (Remake) Ch.1, p. 1-7, Eng
Added 2021-06-25 06:08:50 +0000 UTCHi guys!)
I started redrawing the old pages.
Much has changed since the beginning of "Valentine". I began to draw better, got acquainted with SketchUp. I also became more confident in how to lead the story and create scenes and dialogues in them. So now I want to change the first chapters to reveal the characters better and show the story as I intended it.
In general, everything will remain the same. There will be no plot change or some new unexpected twists)) I just want to make the dialogue more appropriate for the characters, remove silly jokes and make the graphics more pleasing to the eye.
Hope you enjoy the new Valentine)
Comments
Many thanks! I'm glad you noticed this change)
SenA
2021-06-28 04:34:04 +0000 UTCWell done! I appreciate the revision of the jokes very much, and I think the interaction is very natural now.
Juliette Wade
2021-06-25 23:07:05 +0000 UTC
