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First version of Alicia sketch

Got the first version of the Alicia sketch today. Opinions?


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She looks like Alicia's slightly tomboyish older sister. Looks great. Personally more of a fan of long haired types, but that wouldn't really fit Alicia, would it? Makes me wonder what her demon form would look like.

CrossRedstone

Really nice. The only things I would like added would be accessories, mainly a few rings, and the hint/edge of a tattoo along her cleavage/collar that's mostly obscured by her outfit, maybe something surprisingly sentimental between her and Aura that gets revealed as their corruption events go further.

B1gCh33sy

Or legnthen Aura's somewhat to knee length. Or failing that, keep current skirt length but add slits to it to show more thigh? Maybe make it look a bit frayed so it makes it look like she did it herself?

Gifted-Monster

I agree with the skirt length! I just checked and it's the same as Aura's. Definitely needs to be at least a mini-skirt.

aura-dev

Overall, love it. The ahoge in front being a seperate colour really works. The dress doesn't seem to fit the idea of her being a bad girl/ punk. Not sure if it's the colour or the style but...yeah. I honestly pictured Alicia in either denim short-shorts for that daisy duke look, or perhaps a mini-skirt with a midriff-showing tee. That's just me. It's still great though. :D

Gifted-Monster


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