Young Merchant Dinner 3 (Text)
Added 2022-04-12 13:11:01 +0000 UTCA new scene written by our assisstant writer. Prepare yourself for extremely degenerate arm-in-arm walking (Also Groping)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MzkvtIqw0rLPR6rEpOLPbVYB_IoIeyqH8_s2LehEjt0/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Well walking arm in arm is nice but if A actually would press her breasts to his arm would solidify the appearance of the relationship.
OhioOkie
2022-04-12 17:43:58 +0000 UTCMy god, not walking arm in arm! No! That's too lewd!!!
Gifted-Monster
2022-04-12 15:40:19 +0000 UTCwas really nice to read, cant wait for the scene :) big thanks to our assistant writer and your work :)
iTyG Acorn
2022-04-12 14:59:57 +0000 UTCNice! Idk who came up with the idea of more of the young merchant but this scene is genius! Haha! You continue to impress me Auradev not only with the game as a whole but the characters and story as a whole. I like the young merchant lol smug little bastard he is. I hope he gets to bang her eventually like he wants
Reddy Bread
2022-04-12 14:24:55 +0000 UTCI like this a lot. May I suggest there is more physical action describe. An example of what I mean is below. "(YM approaches aura from behind and gropes her) A: Ahhhhhhh~! YM: When you've got tits like this that are all yours, who WOULDN'T want to show off their goods?" Changed to " (YM approaches aura from behind and gropes her) A: Ahhhhhhh~!. Pressing her tits into YM's hand. YM: Pulls A's nipples out and twist. When you've got tits like this that are all yours, who WOULDN'T want to show off their goods?" Adding these short descriptions of what the characters actually do instead of generic statements, I think gives a fuller picture of the scene.
OhioOkie
2022-04-12 14:19:21 +0000 UTCAura is so cute lmao
notmeme50
2022-04-12 13:12:45 +0000 UTC
