Question for my Seclusion Readers
Added 2025-04-22 21:00:36 +0000 UTCHey! So, I’ve recently had a few people mention that they’re having a hard time getting into Seclusion or end up dropping it entirely after the first few chapters. Because of that, I wanted to ask about your experience with the beginning—specifically up to Chapter 4.
Do you think those early chapters + prologue need some adjustment or refining? I’d really love to hear your honest thoughts—especially when the story started to click for you.
Any feedback would be super appreciated. It would help me a lot in figuring out how to make the opening stronger and more engaging for new readers!
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Oh and also I think the first chapter is supposed to be a little bit confusing because the protagonist is a bit confused herself, so give it chance and read little more than four or five chapters I would at least read 10 or more before dropping it, but that’s just my opinion you people can do whatever you want it just a suggestion
Over350pillows
2025-05-07 13:32:38 +0000 UTCDid you read the old or new version? If you 've read the overhauled version then I defnietly improved it when it is only a "little bit" confusing
LittleVixen
2025-05-07 13:21:45 +0000 UTCPersonally, I had trouble reading first chapter because it was a little bit confusing, but then after I really got into it, I liked it and it’s turning out to be a good series so far but then I always read the first 10 chapters of any series I start before I think about dropping it I always give books a chance, that usually turns out pretty well for me.
Over350pillows
2025-05-07 13:14:38 +0000 UTC
