Devils Bargain (All tiers)
Added 2024-08-03 10:38:32 +0000 UTCWelcome to the first update of August, there will be an update here every Saturday through August and September… and we’re going to have so so much fun.
This Saturday’s Offering: THE DEVIL'S BARGAIN
Meet Daniel and Sophia, a couple on the brink of financial collapse with their company. Enter Janath, a billionaire demon with an enticing offer that could solve all their problems—if Sophia is willing to accept his provocative proposal. Will they take the deal? Find out in this captivating addition to the Fantasyland series!
What is cool about this episode?
• Available to All Tiers: As long as you have an active paid membership, you have access to this exciting story.
• Fantasyland: If you enjoy stories featuring demons, elves, cuckolds, and adventurous wives, this is a must-read!
• Unique Format: Experience a new layout featuring 180 pages—90 pages of gripping story content paired with 90 pages of clean, text-free artwork for a fully immersive experience. (So, let me know if you like this or not)
Coming Up Next Saturday:
Mark your calendars for the release of Dark Circus Pt. 3 (Gonzo Studios / Premium tier). Strap in for a wild ride with crazy clowns, kinky dickgirls, a strange revelation about Fatsos death… and revenge!
So stay with us because August and September are going to be fantastic!
Comments
That seems to be the general feeling :D - it was worth a go and just did not work out - there is a new version of the Devil's Bargain coming out on Wednesday. Which will be a Stand Alone and Expanded Text Story and a subtitle version.
Gonzo
2024-08-26 11:33:55 +0000 UTCI think the subtitle style you use for Dark Circus and most of your other comics works well. Having the subtitle boxes adjacent or off to the side of the page actions, helps with the flow and maintaining continuity of the plot. However, the style used Devils Bargain feels like it took away from the story and flow of the comic pages. I think this style or something similar would work if you were to do an illustrated novel, where you'd have blocks of text complimented by an illustration.
haynshark007
2024-08-26 06:31:43 +0000 UTCIt's still an option, and everything is still on the table. Generally, people seemed to think they got in the way (same with the boxes in Black Swan), which is why I went to the 'subtitle style text' (two lines at the bottom) then, people seemed to want more description and story, so I tried this way. I think it probably depends on the story, for example, Fantasyland: Pop Stars (out next month) will be subtitle style as its got more of an 'anime vibe and feel' so that works better. As I said at the end of the day I'm not attached to any particular way, so thanks for letting me know :)
Gonzo
2024-08-03 13:23:28 +0000 UTCwould have been nice if the dialog was sstill in speech bubbles
beey827
2024-08-03 13:09:58 +0000 UTC
