Spiderverse comic: captive! chapter 1 (pages 4-8)
Added 2023-10-16 05:00:03 +0000 UTCChapter 1 is done!! I'll have to create my new temporary tier before posting this chapter on my social media...I'm a bit slow, so this is going to be a patreon exclusivity until I find the time to work on my new tier haha! (And I'd like to have some part of chapter 2 ready too))
I hope you like this first chapter. I initially wanted it to be darker (I was clearly inspired by Arwriter's fic : Messiah) but I wasn't sure of how people would react to it, so I decided to take a less violent direction. Plus my focus is on the comfort part of the story! I love whump/angst stories but I'm a big lover for hurt/comfort haha! :)
I didn't make the rough storyboard of chapter 2 (it is not true...I drew like 2 pages, lmao) so you'll have to wait...plus I'll have to draw some background (so I'm going to SUFFER and cry super hard for days) so you'll have to be more patient with me! The fluff/comfort will start soon! :)
Comments
GET OUT so was I 😂😂😂 I restarted as a sorcerer because you get Karlach a bit later on as a barbarian, but I redid the Miguel lookalike from my first game as my guardian. No spoilers but I was so fckn happy when he showed up ingame 😍😍😍🥰
Amyssra
2024-01-31 18:00:29 +0000 UTCAww you enjoy the game fully which is awesome!! I redo the same tav (a Miguel lookalike barbarian haha) and I never went further than the goblins camp 😔
yakichou
2024-01-31 17:24:41 +0000 UTCTook me 90 hours to get there lol. But I am a completionist so everything takes me four times as long because I have to look in every single crate lol!
Amyssra
2024-01-31 15:10:09 +0000 UTCi didn't finished baldur's gate first act yet but I follow an artist who draw Kar'niss and I got inspired hehe
yakichou
2024-01-31 14:15:44 +0000 UTCI just finished act 1 of baldur's gate (it's awesome) and instantly got that Kar'niss reference! That's one scary dude, I see why you chose him for inspiration!!
Amyssra
2024-01-31 13:54:30 +0000 UTCThat wasn't my focus for this comic and I wanted to let my reader imagine how it would have happened, cause I find it fun to let some things unsaid to let anyone's imagination work. How do you think he got captured?
yakichou
2023-10-27 05:52:04 +0000 UTCI meant to ask! How did doc oc manage to capture miguel in the first place???
FernandoDoesLaundry
2023-10-27 02:45:47 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Jules!! I am glad you like it! The angst was hard to write but fun to draw haha! I had to work more on how subtle but strong the expressions had to be :) Next chapter is super cheesy land of fluff haha
yakichou
2023-10-17 05:33:33 +0000 UTCrubs my little hands together... the Miguel Angst is so good!! the expressions from Peter and Jess are particularly hurtful 😭 excited for the upcoming pages!!
jules
2023-10-17 05:16:01 +0000 UTCThanks, Mic!! I am glad you like it :) next chapter is very cheesy fluff 💕 I hope you will like it!
yakichou
2023-10-17 03:07:32 +0000 UTCChou this is amazing!!!! your artistry combined with the storytelling is just WOW. I'm excited to see more (poor miggy 😭</3)
p1nkmic
2023-10-17 02:08:59 +0000 UTCThis scene was hard to write! 😭 Miles will have to talk to Miggy eventually. Just so we can heal from this scene haha! Miguel's angst is just so good and painful 🤧 I hope you will like the next chapter 💕
yakichou
2023-10-16 20:04:06 +0000 UTC“How does it feel to follow in George’s footsteps?” …… OUCH 😭😭💔💔 THIS IS AMAZINGGGG i live and breathe for Miguel Angst™️ and this right here?? *chef’s kiss* I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONEEEE 💗 keep up the hard work!! 👏
gaygerthelame
2023-10-16 19:43:22 +0000 UTCThis means so much 🥺❤ this character doesn't have an easy life 🤧 I was heavily influenced by the drider from baldur's gate 3! I also look at other drivers designs to see what I wanted to keep or not for Miguel's. I am so glad this chapter spoke to you this much! It means a lot 🥺❤
yakichou
2023-10-16 17:03:26 +0000 UTCread this so early in my morning and i keep thinking about it because it's basically every verbal essay i give someone about this man encompassed. and just made my poor heart die. also spider miguel feeds into my d&d au brain...he looks like the drider from baldur's gate and it's sort of PERFECT. so just good food. this truly made my brain activate on so many levels so like thank you so much
holofang
2023-10-16 16:36:41 +0000 UTCThis first chapter is not very nice to him but he will get comfort from our favorite spider daddy 💕 (and others)
yakichou
2023-10-16 16:32:37 +0000 UTCOh my poor thing The spider version of him was terrifyingly beautiful.
Hallokatzchen
2023-10-16 10:49:09 +0000 UTCI am glad you like it 🥰
yakichou
2023-10-16 09:02:12 +0000 UTCI am glad you noticed this detail ❤ and I am also happy you like monster Miguel! I hope you will like the rest of the comic 💕
yakichou
2023-10-16 09:01:51 +0000 UTCI just notice that the Spiderman 2099 Plush has a sad face and changes to Peter Parker Spiderman. It's all so detailed
Maewe
2023-10-16 08:11:17 +0000 UTCTime to comment now Thank you for sharing this with us. It looks so good! And monster Miguel is so damn nice^^
Maewe
2023-10-16 08:07:47 +0000 UTCGUT WRENCHING. NO NOTES. CHEFS KISS.
V
2023-10-16 07:55:31 +0000 UTCThank you so much 🥰❤❤❤
yakichou
2023-10-16 07:53:55 +0000 UTCThe colors and framing are so good!!!
Brookie
2023-10-16 07:42:16 +0000 UTCMessiah last chapter was close to my limit too. I keep reading this story thanks to the hurt/comfort tag, otherwise this fic would be too hard to read if I didn't have the promise of something nice for Miles and (especially) Miguel. I hope their hell journey will be concluded soon and then we can have (hopefully) multiple chapters of comfort 😭 I am very glad you like it!! His backstory is tragic but sadly realistic on some parts! I didnt add all the characters I wanted but I had to write lore beforehand (It a mix with his comic lore and my own HC), so maybe it would be for another angst comic! :) I hope you will like the comfort I am cooking ❤
yakichou
2023-10-16 06:31:37 +0000 UTCI'm usually more into the physical whump (though the last Messiah chapter is on the edge on what I can take), but this hurts so wonderfully. Migs is just destined for the torture of the mind with his tragic backstory and you did it perfectly! Love the way the thoughts overlap and flow into each other. I am curious though what ideas you scrapped :D Lots of love ❤️❤️❤️
Amyssra
2023-10-16 06:22:59 +0000 UTCAaah sorry Mischie!! I hope the next part will start healing your heart ❤❤
yakichou
2023-10-16 06:08:51 +0000 UTCHe is going to get love soon ❤❤❤
yakichou
2023-10-16 06:08:23 +0000 UTCI am glad you think so ❤
yakichou
2023-10-16 06:07:57 +0000 UTCnaah he's great as he is 😍
Duchess
2023-10-16 05:47:17 +0000 UTCMy fucking heart, Yakiiii
Luh
2023-10-16 05:29:40 +0000 UTCNOOOOO IM CRYIN FOR HIM AAAAAAA PLS LET ME HOLD HIM
Claudia Lucatero
2023-10-16 05:25:52 +0000 UTCHe will start to get love next chapter ❤
yakichou
2023-10-16 05:20:39 +0000 UTCLmao!!! Aaaah I tried my hardest to make him look creepy while still looking like miggy....maybe I shouldn't have make him look like himself but more like a big weird spider 🤔
yakichou
2023-10-16 05:19:27 +0000 UTCI wasn't sure if I went too hard since I didn't added all my sad ideas in this chapter haha! Hopefully the next chapter will start to bring you comfort!
yakichou
2023-10-16 05:18:06 +0000 UTCI just wanna pamper him
Bandito
2023-10-16 05:17:46 +0000 UTCSorry 😬 hopefully the comfort will bring you comfort!
yakichou
2023-10-16 05:16:43 +0000 UTCHaha I didn't planned to make him look hot, lmao!! I tried to make him look creepy while being recognisable so maybe that's why haha!
yakichou
2023-10-16 05:15:43 +0000 UTCThanks
yakichou
2023-10-16 05:13:20 +0000 UTCWe are here partly for the pain 🥲 thank you so much ❤
yakichou
2023-10-16 05:13:11 +0000 UTCThank you!! It is the first time I write this kind of whump 🤧
yakichou
2023-10-16 05:12:47 +0000 UTC"see what you really are" Me: that half spider centaur is hot. Sorry it's just the way I work 🤣 awesome comic 🔥
Duchess
2023-10-16 05:09:44 +0000 UTCThe hurt is really strong in this one
Veronika Huszár
2023-10-16 05:09:04 +0000 UTCMann that shit hurted
Akutou
2023-10-16 05:05:57 +0000 UTCWhy I am I really attracted to the spider Miguel??? Me??? And arachnaphobe?????????
Scarlet Jones
2023-10-16 05:04:49 +0000 UTCOuch :’) but this is so good!!!
Em
2023-10-16 05:02:56 +0000 UTCIt hurts so much! Fantastic absolutely incredible!!!
Lesbian Mothman
2023-10-16 05:02:39 +0000 UTCI’m sobbing on the floor (the whump was done PHENOMENALLY)
SpookySalem
2023-10-16 05:02:05 +0000 UTC
