Captive bonus chapter: page 14-16
Added 2024-03-26 09:54:40 +0000 UTCI hope you'll enjoy this update! I had a lot of fun with Miguel and Gabriel!! My beta reader, Jules, made a pun out of one of my typo and we thought it'd be fun to keep it hehe!
And Momfdzro helped with the spanish parts :)
I am sick since yesterday night, so I will take some time off to heal and recover 😘
Comments
These pages are SO funny!! Also Peter wearing Miguel's stuff............ screams into a pillow
jules
2024-03-29 03:20:59 +0000 UTCGabriel is so fun!! I wanna try out empanadas, they look tasty and comforting! thanks <3 I'm doing better now <3
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:58:17 +0000 UTCthey're cute boyfriends <3 thanks! I am way better now :)
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:57:27 +0000 UTCthank you! I love chaotic baby brother energy haha! I am doing way better now! Thank you <3
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:56:57 +0000 UTCthank you! I had fun with brainstorming their clothes :) I am glad this update was a fun one! I had a lot of fun with it!
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:56:24 +0000 UTCthat's their dynamic haha! I thought that was cute and funny if Miguel would be weak for Gabriel's puppy eye for a long time (I'm sure it still work on him time to time)
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:55:42 +0000 UTCI really wanted Peter to have Miggy's clothes and this outfit was a nice easter egg! :)
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:54:31 +0000 UTCI was so excited to figure out what kind of dynamic I wanted to write about them! I imagine Miguel being very weak with Gabriel's puppy face. He was his first baby (I think they have a good age gap that allow them to have this strong big brother/ little brother connection)! Yess! The kids wanted to tease Peter so badly but they got stopped haha! Pavitr wanted details and he got nothing, poor bean! I am very happy you like this update!
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:53:39 +0000 UTC😸😸😸 get well soon, ChouChou!
Brookie
2024-03-27 06:18:45 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, omg Gabriel is a mood 😆 Hope you start feeling better here soon, mate! Also now I want empanadas.. imma make some
Oddii
2024-03-26 22:02:34 +0000 UTCPeter & Miguel walking in hand-in-hand with Peter wearing Miguel’s oversized shirt is SO CUTE 🥹 get well soon Chou! 🫂💖
Lemon Mango!
2024-03-26 21:11:56 +0000 UTCSo cute! 😭 great work as always!
Bishie
2024-03-26 18:10:25 +0000 UTCGabriel is such a mess! I love him lol And I hope you get better soon!
Hallokatzchen
2024-03-26 14:05:59 +0000 UTCI love their clothes so much🫶🏻❤️ the puns and the sibling energy is just so good😂 Miguel is just🤌✨
MC
2024-03-26 12:28:56 +0000 UTCAH I DIDN'T NOTICE YOU MENTIONED ME THANK YOU SM??? 😭😭😭😭
Momfdzro
2024-03-26 12:26:12 +0000 UTC"Grab-riel" is amazing 🤣🤣🤣 I love the sibling dynamic, and I love that Peter and Meegle walk in holding hands. 🥺🥺🥺🥺
Momfdzro
2024-03-26 12:23:32 +0000 UTCPanel 1 is giving major “Someone will die…” “ of fun 😊” vibes. Also migs really? That still worked when you were 20
Lesbian Mothman
2024-03-26 10:21:22 +0000 UTC🥰
Xetami
2024-03-26 10:07:17 +0000 UTCPeter in his oversized shirt ♥️♥️♥️♥️ and Gabri is too cute 🥺
Soojin K
2024-03-26 10:04:08 +0000 UTCOh I love the brothers so muchhhhh! Gabriel would try to puppy dog face Miguel 🤣🤣 also the kids just being like “oh hey Peter!” They definitely had bets about whether or not they were dating 🤣 as usual, so sweet, so cute, love them all so much wanna squish their cheeksssss! ✨🫶🏻🩵
Rex
2024-03-26 09:57:27 +0000 UTCMiguel is so petty i love it XD
Drajk
2024-03-26 09:56:45 +0000 UTC
