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Collar(ed)6 #18

Oh good lord this took an eternity. I' m really sorry for how long this one took y'all, it was just very difficult to get this remotely the way I wanted it. And I'm still not happy with it, but y'all have been patient long enough.

And yes, y'all read that right. The Xor of this universe has a brother, Arkon-Talatia. I won'tn give anymore away for now. The initial draft of this reveal was riddled with talking heads and I decided to scrap that and just go with 'show don't tell'. Below I've included (along with the untexted version), several penciled panels that were originally drawn. Panels 1 and 4 from this update were part of the original strip. I'm much happier with how they were put to use here.

I'll be back... sometime next week with a new Collar6 and a poll! Thank you so much for supporting me everyone, I truly appreciate your patience, caring and just.. being willing to make this possible.

Thank you all.

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Comments

I'm just glad it seems to be worthwhile! Thank you so much to you and all of my readers for the kinds words both here and on Discord, it really lifted my spirits!

Fiona

Otherwise this is just perfect.

Lomond

I can see why the colouring took longer. That is epic. The only way that could be topped was if it was actually animated with sound effects and bombastic dramatic music.

Lomond

That's exactly what I was going for~ ^.^

Fiona

Oh bloody hell, how did I miss that? That's why I idn't have her wearing a collar in the rough draft, I thought I'd just oversighted it. I'll see what I can do about this >.< Thanks for the catch!

Fiona

Whoops! You broke the collar twice...on pages 17 and 18!

Steve Taylor

Oh boy, really starting to get intense now... Seconding what Mindwave said about the vibrant colors, and I feel like the strap-on being destroyed is pretty interesting from a symbolic perspective.

LlamaMaster

It's tempting, given my love of shonen nonsense, but this comic has to revolve around BDSM (and wrap up soon) so I'll be avoiding my base impulses ;)

Fiona

I had no plan when I started this, so no it certainly wasn't. I decided to include Xor and his brother as the cap-off to this storyline about three strips prior. Evita is basically in a deep trance while Arkon borrows her body.

Fiona

I have to wonder if this was planned from the start or not. The whole Xor/Arkon thing feels like it really came out of left field. It's very tonally different than how this comic started and raises a lot of questions, such as whether or not Evita has some say in all of this.

Well now, this strip certainly has had a very interesting turn of events. Xor actually has a brother in this alternate universe (Arkon, with him being opposed to Xor's actions), with both of them now using Nora (Xor) and Evita (Arkon) as their vessels to continue the fight against each other, a battle which sounds like it has been going on for quite some time; but one that had only taken place indirectly in the recent generations (using their minions to help manipulate the board in their favor), with more direct confrontations like here becoming really rare (either due to a serious lack of suitable vessels which could let them unleash their full powers in a fight and not run the risk of burning out before they could defeat their foe, or due to just how destructive all of their fights can get)! At least, I am getting the feeling that Arkon would actually care about the collateral damage to their surroundings (along with the potential damage that his host' body might end up taking as part of their bond), whereas Xor would only care about beating his brother; with the initial power of his vessel (and its ability to handle enough of his own power to defeat Arkon's vessel) being the most important thing on his mind... I wonder if we will learn which one of them is the older one though (or if they are twins), along with why exactly they'd started fighting in the first place (since I think that I've remembered something from one of the original comics, which had actually hinted at Xor's past)?

DarkJade

Interesting reveal. Love the vibrant use colours for the characters transformation. Also I like the little detail of dildo being destroyed by the sheer force of the dominant energy. I would not be surprised if the next update has a dragon ball still laser battle.

Mindwave

:D <3

Fiona

Thank you so much! I'm rather flattered by that level of praise~ ^.^ I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm sorry it wasn't a longer one! And as to resting, my head will be hitting the pillow in minutes! Thank you again!

Fiona

....WOW!!! 👍👌👏

The Sexy Beast

I feel so blessed to just so happen to be awake when this dropped. It's really amazing and you deserve a good rest after working so hard to finish it for us

Nitari Windrider


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