Collar(ed)6 #20
Added 2019-12-09 08:14:09 +0000 UTCI meant what I added into the tagline, thank you Patrons, and I really *do* hope you enjoyed this. I agonized for a while over how to bring this to a proper close before realizing I probably couldn't do it in just one page. Soooo, this isn't the end either (in case Trina decking Evita didn't sorta give that away). I'll create more pages as per the polls demands and if it's popular enough, it'll continue to be a regular choice on the polls!
Speaking of which, I'll have the new 5$ tier poll up tonight (Monday) so please come back and cast your vote! Next update will be around Thursday and will be the new Collar6~ I hope you all enjoy it!
Just for the heck of it, I'm going to post two of the scripts I ditched below. Enjoy everyone (if that's a possibility).
Discarded Script A
P1
*Arkon Evita looks down at the collapsed form of Nora*
-Arkon Evita: Until next time, brother. But now...
P2
-Arkon Evita: I must do what I can to repair the damage you've left in your wake once more...
P3
*Nora's eyes begin to open as she stirs*
P4
*Nora looks up at Evita, whose hair is back to normal and who appears as baffled as Nora. Neither speak.*
P5
-Nora: What... what just happened?
-Evita: I... I was going to ask you the same...
Discarded Script B
P1
-Narration: Two Months Later...
*Evita approaches Laura in the library, where she's reading a book*
-Evita: Some morning reading, my pet?
P2
-Laura: Hehe, I just saw this sitting on your desk and noticed the writing on it.
P3
-Evita: Ah yes, Xor-Talatia's 'Book of Shadows'. Pure fiction written in old Atlantean.
-Laura: Then you can read it, Mistress?
P4
-Evita: I sure can. Though it's pretty silly reading.
-Laura: I didn't know it was a real language! I've got one sorta like this back at my place!
P5
*Evita's eyes go wide*
-Laura: I found it in an old bookshop and picked it up out of curiosity. I've never understood any of it. It's just been sitting on my shelf for years. Would you like to have it, Mistress?
P6
-Evita: Why yes, my sweet pet, I certainly would, thank you! I think it will look quite good alongside it's partner here. But right now I need you to hurry down to the dungeon. Trina most definitely needs help getting Michelle into her suit.
-Laura: Yes Mistress, right away!
Comments
I didn't enjoy drawing it, as you can tell from how it turned out.
Fiona
2019-12-10 18:30:41 +0000 UTCYeah, I was kind of expecting Trina to be extremely upset; once Evita had removed the mind control technique which the trio (Michelle, Trina and Laura) had been placed under, given that Trina would see this move as subverting their free will and an abuse of her trust! Even though the first time may have done to help protect Michelle from falling victim to Nora’s attempts to guilt trip Michelle back into a role which she wasn’t comfortable with (even though they aren’t aware Nora had been subtly influenced by an outside influence, namely Xor and how this conflict was resolved), using it on Trina and Laura wasn’t right; since Evita had not asked their permission to do so (unlike with Michelle, but even then, Evita wasn’t totally upfront with all the details about how this move actually worked) and she could have potentially slid down a very slippery slope, with regards using it for every situation… Maybe Evita should have tried to talk with them beforehand and explained why Michelle had asked to be collared by her, along with her concerns about Nora’s behavior? Then again, given the fact that Trina didn’t even seem to know about Michelle’s hidden submissive side (despite the two seemingly having known each other for a while, just like the canon series), Trina might not have accepted they were actually telling her the truth; with her now assuming Evita had blackmailed Michelle into being collared and blindly trusting in Nora’s own theories about the event (mainly due to Nora’s position in things, along with warning the wrong people about Evita’s plans, before they were fully ready to go). Still, I don’t see Trina forgiving Evita for this abuse of trust any time soon and she might not be happy with Michelle now either, if her friend tries to defend Evita (with Michelle potentially having to come clean about the fact that she knew all about that mind control technique from the very start and she had also agreed to let it be used on her willingly)! Hopefully though, they will be able to patch things up with Trina, but that event may not happen for a good long while, while they let her cool off now… The big question now, how well exactly has Laura taken the whole situation herself? While she might be a little more forgiving than Trina currently is at the moment, since her personality seem to be the same as her original self, I’m not completely sure that she will want to stay with Evita after all of this.
DarkJade
2019-12-10 17:11:54 +0000 UTCCalled it! Way back when Evita forced the win, I knew Trina wouldn't be happy about it. I knew it. But it hurts me to see Mistress Kappel getting decked.
Joshua Workman
2019-12-10 00:19:03 +0000 UTCi Kind of saw it comming. But it was still satisfying to see
Jason Wyatt
2019-12-09 22:56:40 +0000 UTCWas NOT expecting Trina to do that.
Lomond
2019-12-09 13:56:42 +0000 UTCYou've done excellent work!
KF5TQN
2019-12-09 13:02:46 +0000 UTC
