Collar6 #1140
Added 2020-04-27 11:32:47 +0000 UTCI am so not happy with this one. It was so dynamic in my head and in practice it's just... flat. I'm sorry everyone, I can do better than this. I'll try harder with the next one. Speaking of which...
New C6 will go up next Monday
New Rubber Magical Maiden Julia will go up Monday as well for the 5$ tier.
I'll be having another poll after Julia goes up to determine what the next 5$ tier strip will be~
I do hope y'all are doing well out there. I know a lot of peeps are going stir crazy, but my anxiety-ridden, agoraphobic ass is in her element. At last, being a shut-in pays off! But seriously though, I know this sucks, but please keep up the distancing. I don't want any of y'all dropping off or getting sick.
Well, as it's coming up on 8am my time and I've been up all night trying to make the colours for this strip suck less, I'm going to have a cup of coffee, then turn in for the night. Or morning. Or whatever. In that order. >.>
Good night! Love y'all!
Comments
Yeah, I should've done something like a blur effect on the feet but I thought having her suspended in air was somehow dramatic or something. Didn't quite work out the way I wanted :|
Fiona
2020-04-29 19:54:25 +0000 UTCThank you~ I'm really glad you enjoyed this one :D
Fiona
2020-04-29 19:53:45 +0000 UTCIt won't be the last time you'll see her on her knees before Blackstone~
Fiona
2020-04-29 19:53:24 +0000 UTCThank you my oh-so-loving-and-supportive Daddy~ <3
Fiona
2020-04-29 19:52:58 +0000 UTCYou'll enjoy the Blackstone breaking Michelle portion of the story coming up then :)
Fiona
2020-04-29 19:52:40 +0000 UTCBlackstone has complete control at the moment, but this is a temporary measure. She could've just done this from the get go but she derives her pleasure from breaking a person. Slowly changing their behavior until they're submissive to her completely. Power-wise, Blackstone is the most powerful force on the planet. Physical attacks on her are absolutely pointless at present and she can simply cast aside anything that annoys her, as demonstrated here.
Fiona
2020-04-29 19:52:12 +0000 UTCYeah, I should've added some blur effect around the feet. Blargh, hindsight is a bitch. The expression in the right panel is something I see in anime alot when an unconcerned, powerful person is closing their eyes to demonstrate how little they are concerned with their opponent and open one eye just to regard their prey. Sorry I didn't manage to communicate that very well.
Fiona
2020-04-29 19:47:02 +0000 UTCI was hoping someone would catch that :P But seriously, I drink so much coffee it has like no impact on me.
Fiona
2020-04-29 19:42:52 +0000 UTCcoffee and bed seem counter-intuitive.
Lynn Green
2020-04-29 10:50:21 +0000 UTCDamn, I didn't even notice the logo colors changing. Good eye.
LlamaMaster
2020-04-28 02:26:18 +0000 UTCUh oh... guess trying to defy what seems to be one of the most powerful dominatrixes in the world, on her home turf, really wasn't that great of an idea... I think the action/dynamic portion of this scene works fine, honestly. As somebody else pointed out, a few motion lines or bit of blurriness around Trina would have been nice, but the page still works without it. The one thing that feels weird to me is Blackstone's face in the second panel. I can't tell why her left eye would be closed within context, and it's just a little strange to look at. Obviously not a deal-breaker, though :)
LlamaMaster
2020-04-28 02:26:01 +0000 UTCJust another step in learning storytelling. Another change in the logo color signaling the focus shifts yet again.
Lattimer Pines
2020-04-28 00:56:05 +0000 UTCWell now, looks like Trina's just been sent flying by Blackstone's display of her physical power, while also appearing to have been rendered briefly unconscious from the force of the blow, given how her eyes look now in the first panel. Hopefully though, Trina hasn't been flung that far off of the ground, or should be able to successfully recover her wits in time to actually control her landing; since if she is not lucky enough, she could end up getting seriously hurt (I know that it's kind of being played for laughs right now, but this action still shows us just how dangerous Blackstone actually is, since this tells us that she doesn't really seem to care about anything or anyone; except for those rare people who've successfully managed to catch her personal attention in some way, like Michelle and Laura)! Not only that, Blackstone is clearly powerful enough (or has gotten deep enough inside her target's head to get around any resistance she would normally encounter) to make Michelle kneel upon her command; with Blackstone only needing a single command, which gets coupled with a surprisingly gentle looking touch on Michelle's shoulder, to make the red-head follow her orders... That eye color change is kind of interesting to see though: is Michelle still fully aware of everything that's currently happening around her at the moment (with her trying desperately to disobey what she's been told to do, but her body is no longer obeying her), or is she completely under Blackstone's control now?
DarkJade
2020-04-28 00:23:37 +0000 UTCBe lying if I said I wasn't into Michelle in full pony gear kneeling. That is so hot.
Joshua Workman
2020-04-27 20:14:16 +0000 UTCIt perfectly shows the raw power of our villaness, as well as her excuisite control over said power. It's perfect.
KF5TQN
2020-04-27 19:09:59 +0000 UTCIts great. That last panel..oh how i have been waiting to see that!
Akuhei
2020-04-27 13:06:34 +0000 UTCDAMN! Fiona you have done an amazing job on this. Sixx kneeling is one of the hottest things I’ve ever seen! Great work!
bondagegirrrl
2020-04-27 12:26:13 +0000 UTCIt works for me. I can’t think of anything other than motion lines from Trina, showing how hard and fast she’s been hurled. Other than that, it looks great.
Lomond
2020-04-27 12:21:21 +0000 UTC
