The Initiation #2
Added 2017-09-29 04:00:59 +0000 UTCAnd so concludes this little snippet of a story idea. I hope some of you enjoyed it. I discarded several of the pencils I had ready because it was starting to move in a real 'Parasyte'-looking direction I wasn't comfortable with. It's supposed to be silly, not horrific, afterall. I've included them with the bonus material below along with a discarded panel from the first page, when I was trying to get a feel for what Evelyn should look like. Ultimately, I felt that version was far too similar to Alice, from C6.
Next month's strip looks to either be Collar(ed)6 #5 or Rubber Magical Maiden Julia #2 judging from the current results of the poll. Check below to put in your vote too if you haven't already!
I'd like to thank you all for supporting me in these endeavors and I hope you'll enjoy what's to come!
Comments
The colour of the suit changes to reflect the level of the wearer. Pink is initiate. She can see through the hood via magical means, and a higher-ranking magick-user can easily steal away that ability. She is at the mercy of her superiors, presently.
Fiona
2017-10-05 03:47:51 +0000 UTCA very interesting storyline here, with potential room for its expansion at a later date of your chosing, but I do have a few minor questions on certain items: one item is how exactly will Evelyn be able to see things around her, while wearing this suit (or is there some sort of magic or technology which lets her see out of it, while rendering her face featureless)? After all, while she should be okay moving about the place where she is living (for the most part anyway), travelling anywhere else will be fairly slow going, as she would either have to feel her way around the location, or have someone to act as her eyes; at least until she has fully adapted to her new surroundings. Not only that, is the colour of the suit meant to be a way to tell people who are not dressed up who exactly is inside of a suit, or is this colour change a feature to indicate what rank a suited person is within the group! And finally, can these suits be remotely operated while someone is wearing one...
DarkJade
2017-10-04 16:35:31 +0000 UTCAwesome. And I see what you mean about those unused panels. :) Would happily see more of this story though!
Amyphist
2017-09-30 23:46:50 +0000 UTC
