Magical Rubber Maiden Julia #5
Added 2018-06-05 07:13:14 +0000 UTCI'm not happy with this one. Specifically everything past panel 4. I did my best to save it, but I ran out of time, extended my deadline a week and still don't like how it turned out.
I can only hope that my readers here do.
Thank you for your patience everyone, I apologize for being late. Next update will be Collar(ed)6 at the end of the month. Hope to see you all then.
I've included the B&W and Untexted versions of this strip below in full size.
Comments
I'm glad you pay attention to the little dialogue details! Trust me, her backstory and what you've picked up on (and speculated on) will come into play! :)
Fiona
2018-06-08 20:54:18 +0000 UTCI think those last few panels look alright (to me at least), since it shows us just how quickly Aesthiria is able to spread her influence over the local area, after having been sealed away for a fairly long time indeed; with her also wanting to create a large of basic minions fairly quickly: getting more specialized minions (like what Julia currently is now) can wait until she's got a proper base set up. If all this was just her being a little bit rusty, I'd hate to see her full capabilities; once she's gotten the time to get back into practise and/or finding some other candidates who have just as much hidden potential as Julia had within her! One thing that does sound interesting in Aesthiria's lines though, is that there seemed to be some other elves around during the time when she'd been sealed away, something which is really making me wonder: what exactly is Aesthiria's backstory like... And secondly, are there other elves still around, but they have all gone into hiding somewhere (at least until they detected Aesthiria's return)?
DarkJade
2018-06-07 17:20:36 +0000 UTCJust setting up the narrative for once this really kicks into gear. :)
Fiona
2018-06-06 14:59:12 +0000 UTCits the general villian taking over a group of people the lots of people after you show the single person well. I figure it was you just using the troupe.
mykalwane spirt of gender shrug they greater than she, she greater than he.
2018-06-06 06:41:28 +0000 UTCI'm thinking the clothing probably becomes latex as it coats the victim, provided it's caught underneath the wave of latex rather than ejected by it.
Fiona
2018-06-06 03:31:35 +0000 UTCLooks great, I guess the only question is if there clothes are under the latex or gone?
maninblack
2018-06-05 22:54:39 +0000 UTCHonestly, I think it's a decent page. You can always spend more time over these things, but you can clearly see what's going on here, and the panels have a nice variety to them. Plus, you know... shiny. :)
Amyphist
2018-06-05 22:20:12 +0000 UTCThank you, I'm really glad you liked it! I guess I think about little accessories now since they're something I like to wear and wish I had a lot more of!
Fiona
2018-06-05 18:34:55 +0000 UTCI understand being self critical but I like the creepy yet sexy tone of the later panels. It shows what Julia was spared from and what the elf’s powers can do. Looking forward to the next page. Also- props on attention to accessory details, many artists skip over such things unless they’re part of a character’s story. Gives a more life like quality I think.
Vixandra
2018-06-05 08:41:25 +0000 UTC
